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Published: 2003-09-30 20:44:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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What am i to dowhen an angel breathes
says " i love you"
"lets escape"
i cant clear all this mess
It hurts me, to much
let it rain
i dont understand
why it has to be this way
but im in blame
ill just go day by day
listenging to my thoughts, gather pain
sit awake!
and stare at you!
why does it seem
like life is a mistake
and im tame
How am i to fix all this?
How am i to life, life?(without you)
gathering pain....
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Comments: 6
sugabear [2003-10-18 23:45:39 +0000 UTC]
Good poem. Just curious about the line " How am i to life, life?(without you)" Shouldnt it be live, live? Other than that, its good
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perfectisboring [2003-10-01 02:02:24 +0000 UTC]
Very nice poem. So much emotion. ^^
And, you are too young to say that you're done with love. Just give it some time, and have some faith.
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missmorbidminded [2003-09-30 23:47:37 +0000 UTC]
i know you dont care...so thats all i have.
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takniccals [2003-09-30 21:11:14 +0000 UTC]
Hm...Virus took over before I got to finish...
Erhm, anywho, really nice. I could actually see dissa one in song form...-Hums-
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takniccals [2003-09-30 21:05:45 +0000 UTC]
You're not done with love, buddy. Trust me. Your too young to say that.
'Sides, i love ye, buddy. -Hug-
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