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inisipis — Marimite Manga part deux
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Published: 2018-07-27 21:23:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2733; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 7
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A continuation of my Marimite fan-art manga...
To the fans and non-fans of the series, do enjoy.
Maria-sama ga Miteru (C) Oyuki Konno
(P.s. I'm still lurking at DA from time to time, I might post some sketches or artwork when I feel like it. As to my Yuki sensei Sketch Manga I might not able to continue it for now, but who knows, maybe some spark might come again someday. To all the Miss Yuki fans please accept my apologies.)
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If you’re having difficulty coming up with ideas on how to continue with your Sketch manga, I have one idea you might be interested. Where you left off in the manga, have Katherine defeat Sylvester (the Hulk dude) and Yuki-sensei get kidnaped by the aliens. Ergon and Katherine find out where she’s being held and they fight their way to rescue her. They successfully rescue her and everything goes back to normal. Ergon goes home and finds Yuki-sensei lying on his bed, wearing lingerie—her way of saying thanks for rescuing her from the aliens. He gets laid that night.
A few months later, a rival Ninja clan appears and they are interfering with the missions of Yuki-sensei’s clan. The rival Ninja clan is led by a busty and sexy woman, who ends up becoming the school’s nurse as a way to spy on Yuki and Ergon—she even seduces Ergon, which makes Yuki furious. The two Ninja clans go on a quest—and sabotage each other along the way—to find an object that gives the one who possess it destructive powers.
Feel free to use this idea.
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Actually, that's quite practically the story I already set about to do, it's just the execution in telling that story (the paneling, the composition and design) that I'm quite stumped and partly disappointed. When I made this manga it's supposed to be just an exercise of comic-book paneling and visual narrative constructing, never meant to be taken seriously. The story is quite simple and predictable, just a vehicle for some slam bang action and titillating sexiness and more laughs, nothing more, but as time goes on, one gets attached too these characters that you just created on a whim, and you started to feel the need to give it a certain amount of quality than what one set out before. I'm not to sure about my commitment to the matter at present.
I already designed the Rival Ninja character for a quite a while, though she's looks quite different from the one you envisioned just now, your not too far off about her character. She's supposed to appear a few pages later if I ever get around to re-starting the manga again. I might post some design sketches of her if you like.
Anyway, thanks for your concern, much appreciated.
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I completely understand. The visual construction of the manga is one of the hardest parts, and yes, when you have characters that you have become attached to, you want to do them justice. Sometimes, a story just writes itself that you want make sure it comes out right. Also, please post the design sketches of the Rival Ninja. That would be amazing to see! Thanks, and I hope you soon have free time to continue working on your manga and that you’re able to get some inspiration on how to execute it.
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1st ahhahahaah this is fantastic an cute XD
2nd i miss ya hope your doing ok
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Thank you, as always.
Doing OK, just busy with other things.
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Arima Nana with the well-timed limit break! Zero effs were given by the Kibara Family.
I'm mostly curious to see what happens to your 50 other side characters (including the ones that haven't debuted yet 
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She's the Darth Vader to Yoshino's Sidious.
I'm probably my worst critique in such endeavor I'm afraid. Partly busy with other things and partly quite disappointed with how the artwork is going, kinda frustrating sometimes, but you know how it goes, eyes on front, must go marching forward, what route to take though is different matter.
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Yeah, gotta keep moving forward, by hook or by crook~
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Kanako gets taller and taller every time.
It's like an unwritten rule.
Pretty soon only her shoes will be visible.
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It's a funny trait of her's, especially in those Naisho mini's.
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