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Well, it's that of year again when I start uploading some lit. What is this you may ask?

My attempts at writing a teleplay of something that I hope you Wrecklings, and anyone who reads this, might like.

The backstory on this; this is actually based on an older story (one that I am about to repost as well) I made when the fandom was still hot back in 2013. Long story short, taking a basic premise of the 'Attack of the 50 Foot Whatever' but adding some more meat to the whole thing as well as filing in some character holes between Ralph and Gene. As a whole, the original story was more of a chance for me to get more wild with the concept so that is longer and more detailed but what if I were to condense all of that to a proper episodic format, if WiR had ever been picked up for a TV series (like it should have been)?

You get two parts of a whole story, that's what.

This is part one of the tale and as I have posted it here I'm trying to get some thoughts on the whole thing, mostly;

1. As a story, especially a two-parter, is it entertaining and interesting?
2. Are the characters on point and for those who have yet to be expanded in the world, do they make sense?
3. Do the ideas come across well?

As for the basic summary goes, Ralph has found new friends but also new enemies, enemies who are not afraid of using him as an excuse to continue on behaviors that go on to show that the bad-anons and glitches were not the only ones who had their issues. Of course, Gene once again let's his anger get the better of him and blames Ralph for the sudden increase of backlash against smaller NPCs, especially those like himself and the other Nicelanders who do not have powers. Ralph suggest that that the Nicelanders create their own support group which is rudely interrupted by a few sour anons who don't think an NPC Network is needed in the current heat of the arcade. Gene hits a low point as does Mary but to both their surprise, Vanellope comes to the rescue and invites the two to a day in Sugar Rush for some relaxation but the relaxation is interrupted by something that eventually leads to an all out catastrophe in Fix-it-Felix Jr.

What happens?

Stick around to find out.

I would also like to thank the following deviants/Wreckings/all out friends for helping me with this-

and for helping me with suggestions and editing throughout.

If you'd like to see the original script, read-only, off site the link on the Celtx page can be found here- www.celtx.com/auth/public/reso… ;

Thanks for the read and please critique where needed.

This is the play I commented on: house-of-playwrights.deviantar…

Description
Well, it's that of year again when I start uploading some lit. What is this you may ask?

My attempts at writing a teleplay of something that I hope you Wrecklings, and anyone who reads this, might like.

The backstory on this; this is actually based on an older story (one that I am about to repost as well) I made when the fandom was still hot back in 2013. Long story short, taking a basic premise of the 'Attack of the 50 Foot Whatever' but adding some more meat to the whole thing as well as filing in some character holes between Ralph and Gene. As a whole, the original story was more of a chance for me to get more wild with the concept so that is longer and more detailed but what if I were to condense all of that to a proper episodic format, if WiR had ever been picked up for a TV series (like it should have been)?

You get two parts of a whole story, that's what.

This is part one of the tale and as I have posted it here I'm trying to get some thoughts on the whole thing, mostly;

1. As a story, especially a two-parter, is it entertaining and interesting?
2. Are the characters on point and for those who have yet to be expanded in the world, do they make sense?
3. Do the ideas come across well?

As for the basic summary goes, Ralph has found new friends but also new enemies, enemies who are not afraid of using him as an excuse to continue on behaviors that go on to show that the bad-anons and glitches were not the only ones who had their issues. Of course, Gene once again let's his anger get the better of him and blames Ralph for the sudden increase of backlash against smaller NPCs, especially those like himself and the other Nicelanders who do not have powers. Ralph suggest that that the Nicelanders create their own support group which is rudely interrupted by a few sour anons who don't think an NPC Network is needed in the current heat of the arcade. Gene hits a low point as does Mary but to both their surprise, Vanellope comes to the rescue and invites the two to a day in Sugar Rush for some relaxation but the relaxation is interrupted by something that eventually leads to an all out catastrophe in Fix-it-Felix Jr.

What happens?

Stick around to find out.

I would also like to thank the following deviants/Wreckings/all out friends for helping me with this-

and for helping me with suggestions and editing throughout.

If you'd like to see the original script, read-only, off site the link on the Celtx page can be found here- www.celtx.com/auth/public/reso… ;

Thanks for the read and please critique where needed.

This is the play I commented on: house-of-playwrights.deviantar…