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Published: 2008-05-13 21:56:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 1
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Once there was a boy named JackWho stuffed his sister in a sack
Her took her to a reservoir
Where he tossed her off real far
Jack was not a normal boy
He cut the heads off all his toys
Turned his bike into a coffin
Just to drop his dead cats off in
Poor Jack's parents were confused
But darling Jack was quite amused
He took them to the park one day
And pushed them off a cliff, horray!
Jack is somewhere out there still
You could just be his next kill!
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Comments: 34
Right then. Whatever, I made a mistake.
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@_@.... i like homicidal filthies
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But if he was your brother, you'd be in the bottom of a reservoir.
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*bottom of reservoir* I still love yooooooooooo JAck
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XD
You can be his biggest fangirl.
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If that's all you're going to say, you might as well not comment. It isn't helping any, and if anything, it makes me feel worse.
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Sorry. It has nothing to do with your work, and next time I won't comment.
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Thanks. Sorry about that, I just needed to stick up for myself.
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I love it! Jack sounds fun!
... Until he stuffs you into a washing machine...
Lovable character, none the less.
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Yeah, he'd do that. And he'd use hot water.
I'm glad you like him!!
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Also, for the first line, may I suggest that, instead of, "There once was a boy named Jack," it would sound better as, "Once there was a boy named Jack."
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I think it was that, but I wasn't paying attention when I typed. (I should fix that). I'll get to it today.
Thanks for pointing it out!!
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Hahahahaha, I love this. So darkly humorous. Reminds me of myself O.o
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^__^
It's supposed to sound like a children's poem, but it's not...
Really?? lolz.
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No, not really, I was just being macabre.
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