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Published: 2010-06-18 13:38:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1053; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 20
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24 ran through the Emptiness, dust starting to cake his legs and feet, one of the threads on his bow shredded. He had never had to run so far before--he hadn't even been out in the Emptiness before.'Am I still being followed?'
The young stitchpunk stole a glance behind him.
Nothing.
24 let out a sigh of relief. He must have lost the thing chasing him...
A blur of movement.
24 tensed. Looking around in terror, he backed up slowly.
'I promised 23 I'd be back! I just wanted to find a nice present for her...I promised I'd be back!'
Suddenly, something jumped out from behind a tower of junk. With a thump, it landed right in front of 24. It raised its head slowly, the gear on its left optic glinting in the dimming sunlight. Flexing its grated, copper claws, it advanced toward the horrified stitchpunk. On its face was a sadistic, insane smile.
The gear looked awfully familiar...
"25?" 24 gasped. "Wh-what are you doing?"
25 said nothing. 24 kept backing up until he hit something hard. A brick wall. Splattered messily on it in green paint--
RESIST.
25 stopped moving. He stared at the word with tiny pupils. "Resist," he muttered in an eerily calm voice. He turned back to 24. "Humans can't resist. They didn't resist. No one can resist the beasts." 25 gestured to the large red patches on his body. "That is why I chose beasts. Why resist them? They rule all. You need to understand that."
24 quivered. Where was he going with this?
25 shook his burlap head. "You don't understand, do you?"
24, finding a little courage, stood up straighter. "The beasts are evil, 25. I'll never join their side. Neither will any of the Murlocks."
25 glared at him. "Then maybe I need to send them a little message."
24 lost the little courage he had before. Glancing left or right down the brick wall in despair, he tried to look for a way out.
But there was none. The pale stitchpunk was cornered, cornered by a mad, deranged monster.
"You're one of us!" 24 cried, trying to reach the burlap stitchpunk. "One of us!"
His words did nothing. 25 smiled his insane smile, flexed his claws again, and lunged.
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For 's above and beyond contest! Using the theme Cornered!
The change: This is a lot darker than my usual pics(and fics). Also I spent a lot more time on the details and shading, and the style of stitchpunk is a little different--like a combination of my style and 'real' style.
This is also kind of a prediction of how 's 24 died--did 25 kill really him? That's what I think, but who knows??
Enjoy! Not sure if I'll win the contest, but I still really like how this came out!
24, 25, and '9U' belong to
stitchpunk concept belongs to Shane Acker
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Comments: 8
Edwardwolfie3 [2010-06-20 00:43:45 +0000 UTC]
U8< that's amazing!
i dont believe i could write as well as you have, my friend :3
p.s.
24 is my favorite number = u =
'24th tis my birthday, old house number. etc.
and now i have to love your 9 oc! 8D
i shall draw him, yes?
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inkypaws-productions In reply to Edwardwolfie3 [2010-06-20 00:51:21 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks!
However, this 24 isn't mine. He's 's. I do have my own 24; if you check my gallery, she's the one with the boot on her head.
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Edwardwolfie3 In reply to inkypaws-productions [2010-06-20 00:57:25 +0000 UTC]
aw. well can i draw YOUR 24 oc since i already brought up the offer? and i dont want to dissapoint you. id be sad D;
C:
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inkypaws-productions In reply to Edwardwolfie3 [2010-06-20 01:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Well, of course you can! If you want a reference sheet, just look for pics with a stitchpunk with a boot on her head.
Thank you! Please tell me when you're done!
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Edwardwolfie3 In reply to inkypaws-productions [2010-06-20 01:04:41 +0000 UTC]
= u = oh i shall indeed.
C8 hope you like it when im finished Cx
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inkypaws-productions In reply to Edwardwolfie3 [2010-06-20 15:03:15 +0000 UTC]
I saw it! I love it!
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Jenny-Jen [2010-06-18 22:13:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness ... I LOVE it!
Y'know this was exactly what I was hoping to see from this contest! It's really obvious that you pushed yourself to develop your style more: adding a background, perspective on 24's pose and the shadow, highlights on the feet and hands that really set the pic off. You can tell the emotion just by reading his expression, which is a DIFFICULT thing to do with 9 characters. I also love the subtle little addition of the 'Resist' graffiti in the corner. I'm so glad someone picked up on that It's a very important theme in the fic.
I know I haven't yet revealed how 24 died, but seeing peoples' interpretations of it is REALLY creative and inspiring. Nobody yet has actually shown me their theory on what happened. And you got -very- close, including at least one of the parties responsible. If you want to know how he actually died, send me a note about it I don't mind revealing it since you went to all this trouble.
Your entry is already up in the contest journal Thank you so much for the wonderful entry! I am really, really impressed
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inkypaws-productions In reply to Jenny-Jen [2010-06-18 23:05:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you liked it! Thank YOU, in fact, for the great comment
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