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InsertDeviantName — Flowers Love Poem
Published: 2011-12-17 00:51:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Red camellias because you lit a huge flame in my heart since first setting eyes on you,

White camellias from listening to your adorable voice,

Vagiegated tulips for your enchantingly beautiful and sophisticated eyes,

Yellow tulips showing your smile to be more than the ray of sunshine that it is,

Thornless roses to show the love blossom at first sight,

Mistletoe for a kiss, at the end of the night.

Almond blossom to give some hope,

Ends with a yellow acacia... concealing my love for you.
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Comments: 2

D-Alton [2011-12-17 20:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Glad to see you back to writing. Honestly it feels a little clumsy and doesn't have a nice rhythm to it like your earlier works.

Keep it up though, looking forward to the next one.

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InsertDeviantName In reply to D-Alton [2011-12-17 21:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah was fun to write but reading it back, it does seem a little forced.
I'll hopefully get back to a good standard after a few more writes

Thanks for the critique!

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