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Published: 2008-07-27 13:37:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 299; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description Such words… such silence,
The wrath of your hands touching my face,
So soft, so subtle… such fragrance,
Talking control of my emotional feelings,
Emptying all our worries, emptying our souls,
Swallowing this feeling forever, hoping it will never leave,
Moving my hand closer to your cheek,
Followed slowly with my lips next to yours,
Such harmony… uncontrollable bliss,
Our eyes never losing contact until the time is right…
Eyelids slightly closing hoping yours will too,
Going for our moment of glory…
Our first kiss.
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Comments: 4

Malandante [2008-07-28 00:01:38 +0000 UTC]

You can really feel the emotions. Absolutely amazing. Well done.

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Sugarfree1 [2008-07-27 14:04:01 +0000 UTC]

wow i really like it, so descriptive! means a lot to me because throughout the poem i thought about some1! haven't seen her for 3 weeks but im seeing her on thursday Havent kissed her though but i can just imagine how amazing it would be Nice work!!

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InsertDeviantName In reply to Sugarfree1 [2008-07-27 14:20:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm very glad you liked it

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Sugarfree1 In reply to InsertDeviantName [2008-07-27 14:39:51 +0000 UTC]

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