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InsertDeviantName — Must I Turn
Published: 2008-07-14 15:47:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 173; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Must I Turn...?What dreams... what light... what soul... what passion...,
This sense of us belonging is all to well know,
I see you smile, I see the glare in your eyes,
Escaping from all surroundings, your mind in a different place,
Floating emotions throughout your eyes, looking at your soulful aroma,
Looking at your dedication, your mesmerization, your simplicity,
So lovely and comforting, such wonderfulness and skepticalness,
Distanting aura, flowing away and away,
Behind yours truely while you walk away,
You've just past me without a second glance, I turn and still nothing,
I'm overwhelmed at this instant feeling, this contraption suddenly felt,
Must I turn... Must I turn...?
Comments: 8
again the last line it seems your good at using the last line of a piece to make an impact!
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I tend to do that with most of my pieces, I really like leaving people with questions and mixed emotions about the poems I write
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Very nice poem, I like the fact that you tried something new, and all I can say is that it's very beautiful! Keep up the good work!
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