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Published: 2008-07-31 23:16:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 257; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description
Sacrificial chamber skewering down below,Unable to open the door, unable to get back out,
Why am I in here, why live in doubt?
My own struggles caressing into greater troubles,
And now Iām here in my small soundless chamber,
No more places to go or run, just sat here with no sun,
Alone in the dark yet once more again,
Swallowing my temptations to destruct my soundless voice,
To take away this loneliness, to finally see someone new,
Finally to elapse this moment and live it as a memory.
Comments: 5
yumi08uchiha [2008-08-01 17:45:26 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful! and well written = ) it's kind of hard to put into words of what I think about it...
I love it!
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Malandante [2008-08-01 07:29:02 +0000 UTC]
Whoa absolutely amazing. Shocking and eye opening.
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kiwi-damnation [2008-08-01 01:18:33 +0000 UTC]
Whoa amazing. So beautifully described. Well done
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InsertDeviantName In reply to kiwi-damnation [2008-08-01 17:17:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks alot
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kiwi-damnation In reply to InsertDeviantName [2008-08-01 22:40:48 +0000 UTC]
No worries
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