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Published: 2008-08-04 21:26:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 222; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Slowly caressing your thighs,Looking at you straight in the eyes,
Seeing your eyes twinkle with adorable pleasure,
Moving more abruptly around you human flesh,
Stopping for that moments kiss,
Sudden drowsiness effect from the look on your face,
Slow panting coming from your body language,
Outburst of affection coming from your way,
Overwhelmingly ready for the moment that will come,
Touching slowly, stroking and lightly tickling,
Finally you’re out of your own control,
You’re gasping for more affection,
Now holding one of my hands and moving faster, more abrupt,
Attempting to withhold your on satisfaction,
But with my guiding hand to make it more enjoyable…
Comments: 15
WOO... Hot. I love it. It's rhythm is perfect, its message evocative. Nice job!
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can you send me messages to silwulf only because i tired to check the messages in scarecrowmain!
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Very sexy. I dont see anyway I can critique this. (I havent done poetry in foreverXD) You capture attention which is the best thing about the poem. Good job.
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You have captured the emotions perfectly and put them into the poem just so. You can really feel it. Well done.
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I will definitley browse your poems this one was really good. hope you like
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I will definitley browse your poems this one was really good. hope you like
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I thoght that was pretty good you I like your word choice. You should look at my new peom and comment on it
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I have atleast 37 other poems, feel free to browse them while I browse yours hehe
Thanks for comment 
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