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Published: 2010-09-09 02:43:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Duck... My heart's beat grows faster. Thump. Duck...Thump, thump. Goose! "Oh, come on!", I yell at Lisa, my classmate. Usually I don't even bother to try to chase the other person in this silly game, but I did this time, and you know what happens? I fall. I trip on a lincoln log that Billy or Jacob probably left out and fall flat on my face. As I lift my head to see how much humiliation I should be feeling, I see a red stain on the carpet. "What's happening?!" Lisa shrieks. I begin to cry, which seems to create a chain reaction throughout the class. The teacher comes barreling over to me from her desk. I turn my head away from her in embarrassment, still crying. She begins talking softly to me, in an attempt to comfort me. I slowly turn my head to her cautiously, as if she is trying to hurt me more, even though I know that she isn't. My eyes shift to her and she's holding a kleenex. "It's okay. It's just a bloody nose. It happens to all of us." The class quiets down and the game continues on.
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Comments: 5

acircusintown [2010-10-13 00:36:54 +0000 UTC]

What a wonderful way to show the multiple feelings that fly through the mind of every innocent child. I felt every one of them as I read this piece. I also felt the feelings from the viewpoint of the teacher as well. A very well-written piece. Such a simple topic to evoke so many emotions.

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interuniversal In reply to acircusintown [2010-10-13 01:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. You have no clue how much that means to me, friend.

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nipponfan [2010-09-26 07:56:55 +0000 UTC]

wow.. you know you make such a simple happening so good to read... i call that TALENT!

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interuniversal In reply to nipponfan [2010-09-26 15:38:29 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Once again, you make me happy! Thank you. ^^

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nipponfan In reply to interuniversal [2010-09-26 16:02:45 +0000 UTC]

aww hehe
you're most welcome

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