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Published: 2007-07-27 22:15:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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I reach my hand over,To try and find the edge,
Theres nothing there.
Nothing to hold onto,
My eyes are closed,
They can not open,
I don't feel my hands
By my side,
I can't any more.
And no matter how I try,
I can't feel it any more,
I can't feel my breath,
Or the life thats inside,
You took it.
You took it away from me.
I reach again and again,
For the edge,
But its still not there.
What you said,
What you told me,
Is not what is here,
The day has come,
The one you spoke of,
But as I slip,
The edge is gone,
Your not here,
As you said you would,
So now I fall.
But your not here,
As you said you would...
Your not here...
As you said you would...
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Comments: 7
skyshrouds [2008-06-20 23:17:09 +0000 UTC]
We've all felt this, I remember that first warm connection I made, where everyday only felt right if they were there...yet since then that feeling and dissapearance has happened a few times.
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InTheScript In reply to skyshrouds [2008-07-14 17:56:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, i know what you mean... ^_^
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Kalmek182 [2008-05-06 22:46:07 +0000 UTC]
i dont really know what makes a good poem, but all that matters is that i like what im reading-
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InTheScript In reply to Kalmek182 [2008-05-07 01:25:06 +0000 UTC]
Lol, i don't know either... Thank you! ^_^
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DreamFarfalla [2008-04-06 22:11:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I'm sorry about that... But this poem's very beautiful. Somehow, I can relate to it, or maybe I just watched too many movies again! XD I really like the way you used words here, very creative.
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InTheScript In reply to DreamFarfalla [2008-05-07 01:24:45 +0000 UTC]
Its alright... Lol, we are actually friends again! After a few years... She realized... Lol, she realized what she had lost!
Thanks! ^_^
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