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IntoDeep — Death's Shadow
Published: 2004-06-08 03:43:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 21
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Description She's always near me;
I can feel it
Following my shadow;
Or is the shadow she?
She's waiting for the right time;
For the precise moment

Why don't you do it already?
You have all the power,
What do I have to lose?

She must be doing this on purpose;
making me more insane
I have no clue of what's to ahead
But in the end;
there will be no more pain and suffering

I will win;
one way or another
'Cause death will do what I wish for
Or will she?
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Comments: 11

staypufftyrant [2004-06-13 03:06:20 +0000 UTC]

truely excellent, don't let death get ya down

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IntoDeep In reply to staypufftyrant [2004-06-13 22:44:01 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the comment

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LinkinLuver13 [2004-06-08 22:25:47 +0000 UTC]

wonderful

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IntoDeep In reply to LinkinLuver13 [2004-06-10 03:42:56 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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ViBeS [2004-06-08 14:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Hmm .. it's sounds like a song unfinished and I would really like to participate in this one ...
If you are offended, then by all means put me back in my place.
But I am going to be brave .....

Ok let's give this a try shall we

Will she see me, when I fall, when I enter her room.
Will she touch me with her cold finger, making me freeze up.
Will she stop, to try and bring be back, will she take me in her arms.
I need her, want her, want to have her close.

Every day I long for that moment, every day I look in the mirror.
Looking at myself, at her.
Sad.
I wish I never had, this life I received.

Is it my time yet, time to go.
When will I know? Will you tell me in advance and warn me?
Please take me, I am here on my knees begging, begging for you to do your job.
I am lost.

I will win;
one way or another
'Cause death will do what I wish for
Or will she?

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IntoDeep In reply to ViBeS [2004-06-10 03:41:10 +0000 UTC]

offended? hells no...more like greatly appreciate it

i like the addition of yours, i wanted to add more and i think u did it for me thanks

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IntoDeep In reply to IntoDeep [2004-06-11 03:59:26 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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ViBeS In reply to IntoDeep [2004-06-10 09:35:24 +0000 UTC]

Phew

I was a bit "scared" if you may find it an intrusion on your work.
Glad you didn't crusify me

Thanks ...

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darthmarlan [2004-06-08 04:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice. I like this one. Interesting piece.

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IntoDeep In reply to darthmarlan [2004-06-10 03:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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darthmarlan In reply to IntoDeep [2004-06-10 03:52:08 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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