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IntoDeep — Let Go
Published: 2004-06-01 02:50:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 271; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 27
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It's not like I'm obsessed with deathI just want to feel what it's like;
To see what's the end of my story
To see who would even care
To let go of it all
All the head pounding
Heart throbbing
Chest exploding
I want it all to end
To stop the pain
Along with the misery and confusion
I put upon myself
I just want to die and let go
But one thing is holding me back
I don't want to think you will be
All alone when I'm gone out of your life
I'm scared if I pull you down with me
Tears fall as I start to fall down with them
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Comments: 16
Wow, this reminds me of something I think about alot. What would it be like to die? Who would be affected? Who wouldn't? Well I sure would be affected by yours. Very good poetry here, great job.
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why thank you 
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Oh I know, but I'de miss your poetry.. that's what I meant.
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Wonderful writing, and interesting subject too.
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hmmm.......they say great minds are often tempted to suicide......so that's my problem....hmmmm.......
all ii know is, ii wanna truly live life alive before ii truly truly die......
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yea as the saying goes, live life the fast lane or live life while you're still young or some shit like that
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What causes this sadness if I may ask, this run towards the end of the tunnel?
Is it that you feel misunderstood, is it that you don't feel complete or satisfied with yourself or what is around you?
I am just interested since I lost many friends in the past in all the awfull ways one can think off and would not like to loose another
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Ah yes it could be 
About what you feel or miss inside, try to find your inner strength and soul and such .. may help you find some satisfaction in life.
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the first paragraph u wrote...could become a poem...
the sadness has been with me since i dont know when, i guess its a mix of misunderstood, feeling empty inside, n the whole world...
sorry to hear about the lost of ur friends, i know how that feels to lose someone you care about or a loved one
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