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IntoDeep — ::Taken Over::
Published: 2004-04-18 23:54:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 344; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 59
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Description Thy mouth so wise as an elder
yet thy heart so weak as a new born child
What is to become of thee?
With passion and desire
For the longing of death and chaos
Tis not all but merely a Satan's dream dreamt
Thou art overcome by the darkness
Hence in the shadows of the unknown
has taken over thee
But
I who laid eyes on thee
O what purity, what beauty!
I see deep inside the depths of thy soul
O what sadness, what grief!
I see that lays on the expression of thy face
Must you be full of joy and happiness
As well as all the other mortals in thine world
If I were to choose, I wilt help bring a smile on thy face
But
To ask of all this,
This is too much to ask, even for the Lord
Is it not?
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Comments: 15

staypufftyrant [2004-07-10 00:38:59 +0000 UTC]

I like how you converted what you normally do into Shakespearean writing. Very clever, I like it.

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IntoDeep In reply to staypufftyrant [2004-07-10 04:20:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ley-cort [2004-07-09 19:19:42 +0000 UTC]

But
I who laid eyes on thee
O what purity, what beauty!
I see deep inside the depths of thy soul
O what sadness, what grief!

my fave part !
see ? you got skills too Love !

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IntoDeep In reply to ley-cort [2004-07-10 04:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks i love that part too hehe

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Gwyliwr [2004-07-09 03:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Hey.. Awesome. .. Great work. A different tone than usually seen from you.. Enjoyed the variation.

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IntoDeep In reply to Gwyliwr [2004-07-09 13:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Thank you.

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MysticAvora [2004-07-08 23:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Mwahhhh! I LOVE IT! --->You should have shown me sooner! ---> I love your shakespear mood! It's the perfect thing..It soooo goes with my pic! I love it--> ( this is a really awesome --b/c I really ususally don't know what to say to poems..but w/ this one I got all bubblie inside... O_o ) I think it has to do with ---> historical-like romanticism. Thanks for showing me!!

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IntoDeep In reply to MysticAvora [2004-07-09 03:31:26 +0000 UTC]



thanks a lot for the and the comment. I appreciate it very much.

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TakodaVega [2004-04-24 12:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's a great write! Keep up the good work ^^

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IntoDeep In reply to TakodaVega [2004-04-25 02:00:02 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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ViBeS [2004-04-21 14:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a play ... nice!

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IntoDeep In reply to ViBeS [2004-04-21 19:59:03 +0000 UTC]

heh thanx

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darthmarlan [2004-04-19 09:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Interesting tone of writing, and rather interesting piece also.

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IntoDeep In reply to darthmarlan [2004-04-19 22:26:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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darthmarlan In reply to IntoDeep [2004-04-20 09:33:47 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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