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Published: 2014-04-06 02:34:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1524; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 0
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Description there are bruises on my skin
like fairy dust, (i wish i could
fly away)

          it’s late and
        night creatures are crawling between
     anticipated gestures.        my hands are
 shaking but I am not scared. I am
an earthquake dressed in moonlight, I
  am a natural disaster, I am an
         apocalypse.    he
is static and I can’t decipher my own
                                           thoughts, he is
     in my throat, crackling like a fire.
  every word crumbles before it stands tall. he
                    is the future come back
                                   to warn me. he
is somewhere different.

   but he holds my hand and the sky whispers
   that everything is okay so for once everything

   is okay, (i’m so close to flying)
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Comments: 59

Sammur-amat [2014-05-19 22:42:43 +0000 UTC]

all i want to do is you

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intricately-ordinary In reply to Sammur-amat [2014-05-23 01:40:33 +0000 UTC]

and a returned to you

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Sammur-amat In reply to intricately-ordinary [2014-08-13 06:59:41 +0000 UTC]

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sherbetblooms [2014-04-08 08:40:40 +0000 UTC]

beautiful chaos

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intricately-ordinary In reply to sherbetblooms [2014-04-09 02:43:27 +0000 UTC]

<3

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SycamoreSea [2014-04-08 02:23:41 +0000 UTC]

"I am an earthquake dressed in moonlight" is one of the greatest images I have ever had the fortune to read. 

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intricately-ordinary In reply to SycamoreSea [2014-04-08 02:35:34 +0000 UTC]

 ahhhh thank you so much

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SycamoreSea In reply to intricately-ordinary [2014-04-08 02:36:39 +0000 UTC]

<3 you're welcome, as always c:

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betwixtthepages [2014-04-07 17:40:49 +0000 UTC]

"I am
an earthquake dressed in moonlight, I
  am a natural disaster, I am an
         apocalypse.    he
is static and I can’t decipher my own
                                           thoughts, he is
     in my throat, crackling like a fire."

This bit is absolutely LOVELY.  Beautiful work!

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intricately-ordinary In reply to betwixtthepages [2014-04-08 01:06:31 +0000 UTC]

i appreciate it, thank you!

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betwixtthepages In reply to intricately-ordinary [2014-04-08 01:35:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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VertigoArt [2014-04-07 14:53:21 +0000 UTC]

very nice. i like to fly into oncoming traffic and run screaming into a crowded room, but that is just me.

great read, thanks for sharing.

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intricately-ordinary In reply to VertigoArt [2014-04-08 01:06:18 +0000 UTC]

haha, thank you so much

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VertigoArt In reply to intricately-ordinary [2014-04-08 01:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Happy to be of service

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Cole-y [2014-04-07 06:00:48 +0000 UTC]

brilliant brilliant brilliant

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intricately-ordinary In reply to Cole-y [2014-04-08 01:06:08 +0000 UTC]

asdfgsfagdg from you that means everything

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Tales-of-Tao [2014-04-06 16:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Breathtaking work.

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intricately-ordinary In reply to Tales-of-Tao [2014-04-08 01:05:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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liveartaslifeart [2014-04-06 14:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Again, dear, wonderful words. ^^

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intricately-ordinary In reply to liveartaslifeart [2014-04-08 01:05:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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liveartaslifeart In reply to intricately-ordinary [2014-04-08 01:07:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem! ^^

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Maya-24 [2014-04-06 05:16:52 +0000 UTC]

nice poem

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Maya-24 [2014-04-06 08:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Nice tits

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intricately-ordinary In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-04-08 01:05:29 +0000 UTC]

oh you

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aWay-with-knives In reply to intricately-ordinary [2014-04-08 02:17:31 +0000 UTC]

<3 <3

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Contradictory55 [2014-04-06 03:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Somehow, for some weird reason, this makes me think of the space inbetween cupped hands.

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intricately-ordinary In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-08 01:05:35 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Contradictory55 In reply to intricately-ordinary [2014-04-09 02:58:13 +0000 UTC]

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-06 08:57:48 +0000 UTC]

<3 <3

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-04-09 02:58:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh good, I make sense to people

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-09 19:28:04 +0000 UTC]

I reported your comment as spam, in response to your assuming such.

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-04-13 20:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Sorry?

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-13 20:51:33 +0000 UTC]

I would be too, if I were you.

You'll be hearing from us, soon.

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-04-13 21:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Okay. I'll take your warning to heart and try not to spam people anymore.

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-13 21:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-04-13 23:32:06 +0000 UTC]

But I warn you! Love gushes out of my pores and I don't know if I can keep it off the interwebs! Specifically dA!

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-14 01:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Have you ever played jenga, against a non-hueman opponent? And lost?

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-04-19 23:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Not yet?

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-20 01:03:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm hoping

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-04-20 22:51:02 +0000 UTC]

Hoping for what? That I play and lose against a computer in jenga?

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-21 01:45:38 +0000 UTC]

I hope you lose your shirt

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-04-21 19:10:59 +0000 UTC]

I rather like my shirt though. It's comfortable.

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-04-21 19:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough. I hope you keep it

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-05-04 01:49:47 +0000 UTC]

I shall ^^

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-05-26 13:46:39 +0000 UTC]

godspeed, my child, knobspeed

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-06-01 00:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Urh... what am I speeding towards again? Jenga or something?

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-06-02 17:28:32 +0000 UTC]

the ice levels from donkey kong

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-06-07 03:53:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm okay with this Better ice than fire~

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aWay-with-knives In reply to Contradictory55 [2014-06-10 14:24:03 +0000 UTC]

id say that is correct, but logically
fire will destroy any nerves you feel with, far-faster than theyd freeze
im mostally interested in having sex with tourists.
but fire you can sit back and take it,
yourself

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Contradictory55 In reply to aWay-with-knives [2014-06-17 22:10:00 +0000 UTC]

Except I just plain don't like the heat. I dislike candles, summer, and the sun without a cooling breeze.
Sex with a tourist? That seems iffy. They could be healthy.

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