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Published: 2009-12-30 17:30:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1246; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 26
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"Crystal Kiss"My first actual comic-format yuri. Or...it's going to be. I never finished the panels.
The plot gets really good. But to you perverts (like, the boys in my latin class. You know who you are) this is a romance yuri. Yes, there will be fanservice, but that is NOT the point of this comic.
The point? That is a secret between me and the characters.
This picture was also my test run on screentones. Any critiques?
Btw, the first girl (named Kashikoi Makiba) is a blond haired blue-eyed first-year at the high school/girls boarding school.
The second girl (Shinkei Megumi) has brown-ish red hair with matching eyes. She's a second year.
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Comments: 36
Tee hee~~~
Yuri.
I think I have a plot for both a yaoi and a yuri XD XD too lazy to draw, cause i've got 2 series to do already!!!! LMAO
And thank you for faving. You don't need to thank me for faving this - it's cute!
YURIIIIIII~
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Thanks anyway for faving it ^_^
I love yuri. Yaoi is great too, but I'm more into fan pairings for that one. XD
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XD I totally agree with that.
Yaoi....it's just more fun with fandoms. It's awesome either way, but...shounen-ai is great for original....boy's love manga, and good lord...yuri is good with everything.
i LOVE YURI.
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I love yuri too <3
Non-fan pairings in yaoi bore me to tears. Argh, the time my friend asked me to read Okane Ga Nai...
But YURI! YES!!!!!
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^_^ Thanks. It's based on real people, but not really...lol
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LOL does that make sense?
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HEY! YOU'RE SIGGY! HINEKO = UKE? WWAAAAAAHHHH?
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I'm a uke....U didn't know?
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lol no. I'm a seme so...BETTER WATCH OUT
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I just don't want ot post any more pictures up until my art gets good
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Your art is good...then again from me thats not saying much....
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My art sucks, and urs is good!
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What are you talking about I have no art.
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Thats not art that is doodle crap
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Well then ur art must be good if that is doodle crap
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nu all i can do is doodle crap XP
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But that's NOT doodle crap thats good!
Btw, I drew my avatar for once!
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AWWWWWWWWW Its so good ^W^ and cute
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Not too bad, the only thing you really need to work on is making your lines a bit crisper. They look a little blotchy. Cute eyes. =]
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Thanks! Yeah my lines are bad >_<
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Whew, I always get worried that people will get all pissed when I try to critique stuff a little. Glad you took it well. =] You're not a bad artist, I have trouble getting lines good too. I've tried going slower,, and using manga paper that doesn't feather, but I still have trouble. XD Keep practicing, and you'll get it. Good luck with your manga.
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Thanks!
Heh, my friend Ben critiques all my stuff even when I don't want him to, and he is really hard to please. So I'm used to really bad reviews lol.
But yours was good! Thanks!
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