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Invader-DEM — Invader Dem Part3
Published: 2011-06-29 04:28:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Zim and Gir had accepted me into their home. Gir was overly loving and carefree I liked him. Zim was friendly as well and had suggested when we get to his home I get a disguise. So I chose my costume. A gothic human male. It suited me well I thought. Zim said "I will take you to Skool tomorrow. It is a human learning facility." I responded "Ok what should i do?" He said "You will be my brother just act as I do." I confusingly responded "Ok??"

I layed in my room with Nemi and Gir both in their outfits scratching their heads. It was 3 a.m. according to the clock in my room. I couldnt sleep. Every time I dozed off the memory would assault my mind. I layed there until morning then Zim knocked on my door and said "Dem time for Skool get your outfit on." I changed into the outfit and walked out of my room. I told Nemi "Be nice to Gir hes our friend and listen to him hes our new family."

As Zim and I were walking to Skool a human named Dib confronted us pestering Zim. Dib said "Whos your new friend Zim? Is he an alien too?" Zim responded angrily "HE IS MY BROTHER YOU INSOLENT FOOL NOW LEAVE US ALONE!!" I looked at Dib and he glared back at me.

Zim and I entered class and Ms.Bitters the teacher said "We have a new student class his name is Dem he is Zim's brother" I waved hesitantly. Ms.Bitters said "Do you have anything to say Dem because I DONT WANT TO HEAR ANOTHER PEEP FROM YOU!!" I said hesitantly "Hello everyone Im Dem and if you want to talk to me go ahead."

Hours passed when the bell rang and Zim told me "Time for lunch follow me Dem." I followed Zim to the cafeteria as he said "This is where we get human food, I have grown a tolerance to it but if you dont want you dont need to get it." Zim and I sat at a secluded table away from other people. Dib told his little sister Gaz about me. She looked over at me and walked to us away from Dib. Dib yelled "GAZ WAIT DONT GO OVER THERE!!!" She ignored her annoying sibling and sat by me "So youre the new kid huh?" I said nervously "Yes.." I admired her because she liked the same fasion as i did. Gaz and I made conversation about the GameSlave 5 that was soon to come out. She said "I want one but I cant convince my dad to get me one." I said "I could get you one if youd like?" She responded happily "That would be amazing."

The lunch bell rang as Zim and I walked back to class. He asked "So you like Dib's sister?" I responded embarrased "You could tell.." The Skool bell rang and it was time to go home. Zim and I were occompanied by Gaz. She asked "Dem are you Irken like Zim? I wont tell Dib." I looked at Zim and we both said "Yes." Dib found us and Gaz and began yelling at her "WHY ARE YOU WITH THESE TWO ALIENS!!" I yelled at Dib "LEAVE HER ALONE SHE CAN DO WHAT EVER SHE WANTS YOU JERK" Dib punched me and knocked me to the ground. I glared at him in a rage "You shouldnt have done that..." I got up and roundhouse kicked him as hard as I possibly could. Zim rushingly pulled me back and stopped me saying "Hes not worth it Dem."
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Comments: 10

enigmatia [2011-06-29 06:28:28 +0000 UTC]

The text is a lot better on this one, yeah.. looks like you put more time into it than the others.

Hehe I kinda assumed instantly that Dem was a girl. Most of Invader Zim fan-fics about Irkens crashing into Earth and going to live in with Zim and dress up as humans are girls..
Maybe you should somehow incorporate his gender in the start because that might be a little embarrassing for you LOL
Maybe you should describe what exact gothic clothes he's wearing. Whenever I think of gothic people, I always think of history lessons and see this [link] Goes with my sense of humour. I only got the picture when Dem mentioned he dresses the same as Gaz.

What type of fashion did DEM like when he was an Invader? Invaders tend to wear that gaudy pink so I dunno lol.

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Invader-DEM In reply to enigmatia [2011-06-29 06:32:07 +0000 UTC]

dem was always the shadowy outcast he wore solid grey shirts with a black trench coat and combat boots with steel clips and spiked steel toes

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enigmatia In reply to Invader-DEM [2011-06-29 07:04:45 +0000 UTC]

I thought
He was an Irken Invader.

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Invader-DEM In reply to enigmatia [2011-06-29 07:05:52 +0000 UTC]

He was but he was exiled so now he is a rebel

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enigmatia In reply to Invader-DEM [2011-06-29 08:39:07 +0000 UTC]

So he isn't an Invader at all?............ Not all Irkens are Invaders. If you remember Episode 1.

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Invader-DEM In reply to enigmatia [2011-06-29 08:41:25 +0000 UTC]

he is an exiled invader

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enigmatia In reply to Invader-DEM [2011-06-29 11:21:40 +0000 UTC]

Just to set your out to make sure there's no plot holes or anything...

You said he was always a goth kid his entire life, meaning even before being in the Elite -> [link] [real concepts yahyah]

He's kinda breaking uniform policy isn't he lol. Wouldn't go down well as a good choice elect for the Great Assigning of what, Impending Doom 1?

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Invader-DEM In reply to enigmatia [2011-06-29 23:08:23 +0000 UTC]

the uniform policy for dem was dropped because of is outstanding war expierence he was an elite guard then joined the armada to become an invader thats what his pak has him programmed and was to be sent out during impending doom 2 but had slave family so they drooped him out of the program. then the enslavement thing came to dem well he refused and fought back thats what got him exiled

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Invader-DEM In reply to enigmatia [2011-06-29 13:04:14 +0000 UTC]

he was chosen to be in impending doom 2 but was rejected and found his family being enslaved by the tallest so he sought revenge wit a stolen prototype robot aka "Nemi" then tey were exiled to earth

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Invader-DEM [2011-06-29 04:35:52 +0000 UTC]

hallo all please watch if you like Invader Dem

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