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Invader-Nie — Better Off On My Own
Published: 2005-04-02 00:52:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 39; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description I wanted to believe that you really
did love me, but it just wasn't worth it.
I can't believe I was so blind, you made so easy
to pretend that you see me but I knew it all
along. If you try to tell me that's it not true
that I wasted all of my time.

Memories fading, my love turns to hating,
I can't believe it turned to this.
Heart beat is stopping, my mind is just throbbing
as I realize what I've done.
I know that I hurt you, and of course you hurt me too
but after all of this I know...
I'll be better off on my own.

I'm hearing whisperes, my hands are shifting as
I begin to cry again.
I don't want to say this, I know that I hate this
after all of this time I know,
That for you to really show what we both know isn't there,
Now you finally realize...
I'll be better off on my own.
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Comments: 2

Beowulf04 [2005-04-02 00:55:10 +0000 UTC]

hmm, interesting you pieced the poem together. There's not really any rhythm, or rhyme scheme is there? It;s very un-uniform.

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Invader-Nie In reply to Beowulf04 [2005-04-03 23:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Just a collection of angry words,

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