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Invader-Nie — Fallen Snow
Published: 2005-02-05 23:07:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 200; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Description I sit and stare out this illusion of myself,
I look inside to realize that I hide withen,
A shadow of betrayl of a mix of broken words.
I blink to see forgotten dreams of falling snow to
fall as softly as the wind, to watch as my age passes by
like an illusion in the rain.
A wasteland of aching hearts and empty souls of feelings untold,
forgotten memories lost withen my heart.
Everywhere that I go I find myself a diffrent person, emptier and deeper
in my hiding place as I close my eyes to wish it all away.
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Comments: 12

xcarpexdiemx [2005-02-07 16:47:25 +0000 UTC]

oh man i totally loved that, great peice

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Invader-Nie In reply to xcarpexdiemx [2005-02-09 01:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks, ummm...

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ChaosSubliminal [2005-02-06 20:05:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work, I really like it, definitely a +fav! ^_^

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Invader-Nie In reply to ChaosSubliminal [2005-02-09 01:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^_______^

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ChaosSubliminal In reply to Invader-Nie [2005-02-09 02:51:44 +0000 UTC]

No problem, it was really well done.

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Invader-Nie In reply to ChaosSubliminal [2005-02-09 02:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Not many people favor some of my work so it's just a first, thanks!

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ChaosSubliminal In reply to Invader-Nie [2005-02-09 03:00:46 +0000 UTC]

I can't see why they wouldn't like it... Anyways, Hope to see more like it in the future!

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Invader-Nie In reply to ChaosSubliminal [2005-02-09 03:06:49 +0000 UTC]

There should be, I'm in a mood to write some good poems! ^^

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ChaosSubliminal In reply to Invader-Nie [2005-02-09 03:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to check em out!

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Invader-Nie In reply to ChaosSubliminal [2005-02-09 03:36:18 +0000 UTC]

I put a new one up but it won't show! I really liked it too!

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ChaosSubliminal In reply to Invader-Nie [2005-02-09 03:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes it does it too me as well. Usually when I hit refresh it comes up.

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Invader-Nie In reply to ChaosSubliminal [2005-02-09 03:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I shall try that, I hope it comes up or else I'll cry,

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