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Invader-Nie — Human Emotion
Published: 2005-02-09 02:14:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description I look around to see myself standing in the broken glass,
each shattered peice resembles a broken dream.
I close my eyes and realize myself withen another dream,
to never see the real me as I take in another breath.
I'm shaking as I sit here, looking at myself.
To see the dimly colored image of a girl I once knew.
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Comments: 10

xalan [2005-02-09 05:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, your peoms so inspire me! (I get these great mental flashes when I read them!) I might have to work on an image for this one as soon as I finish up the song lyrics one...

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Invader-Nie In reply to xalan [2005-02-09 17:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow...another comment that I seem to loooooovvvvveeeeeee....

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Lckyducky531 [2005-02-09 04:10:02 +0000 UTC]

very good, easy to relate to and good to know that maybe someone has similar feelings about themselves sometimes

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Invader-Nie In reply to Lckyducky531 [2005-02-09 04:11:03 +0000 UTC]

That's why I named it human emotion, it's a normal human feeling everyone goes through. ^___^

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yellowdream [2005-02-09 02:18:23 +0000 UTC]

I like it too

For me, the best part was the imagery. It really makes the poem stand out. If I wasn't so lazy, I would draw a picture for it. Maybe someone else will do it for me... Anyway, it's a pretty cool piece of poetry. And I can't see anything wrong with it.

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Invader-Nie In reply to yellowdream [2005-02-09 02:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Welll....thank you, I wrote it in a couple of minuets and I didn't add too much thought to it. I mostly pictured the music video for "numb" by Linkin Park and I wrote what I remembered seeing soooo...

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ChaosSubliminal In reply to Invader-Nie [2005-02-09 03:41:38 +0000 UTC]

That was an awesome music video. And great work on your poem too!

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Invader-Nie In reply to ChaosSubliminal [2005-02-09 03:43:22 +0000 UTC]

I know! And thanks, I worked pretty hard on it since I never really write like that when I have to at skool

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ChaosSubliminal In reply to Invader-Nie [2005-02-09 03:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, writing essays and stuff for school sucks. It's so much beter written freely.

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Invader-Nie In reply to ChaosSubliminal [2005-02-09 03:47:42 +0000 UTC]

I know, at the moment skool is deffinatly not my friend.

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