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Published: 2011-02-25 21:48:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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A short poem I wrote.Glass Rose
Love is like a glass rose,
It breaks, however it goes,
It's sweet, but gentle,
Some think it's a bit mental,
Oh for whom has that glass rose,
It might break, and make you bleed,
But as long as you have those memories,
With that one glass rose.
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Comments: 4
gwendpa [2011-02-25 21:54:01 +0000 UTC]
i dont think its stupid can you please re edit that so it wont say it becous i think you are realy on to something here the poam is wonderfull dont be afreid to support something you do becouse people may rejact you! if someone gives you good criticism use it to grow
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Invader-Raxx In reply to gwendpa [2011-02-25 21:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, and sure. I'm so happy to finally get a good comment on my work! ^_^
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gwendpa In reply to Invader-Raxx [2011-02-26 16:49:45 +0000 UTC]
well im sure you are going to get a whole lot more good comments!
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