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Published: 2014-12-27 03:08:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 2518; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
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The Hive.This strange case is an odd one..
It seems that a demonic presence possesses this poor woman. This demon takes in the form of a swarm of insects and spiders that occupy a body of a young mentally ill woman who is only known as Francine. The girl doesn't speak or can't speak- only letting out guttural moans and gurgles as the infected wound across her throat bleeds as more of the bugs eat her from the inside out. The Hive always speak in third person, such as speaking in sentences like "We are the Hive" or "Don't mind Francine, she won't do any harm..yet we will feast on your flesh if you provoke us." and the "voice" sounds like whispering and buzzing of multiple insects yet the words are clear as day. Francine..the host of this demonic swarm is like a protective haven for biting flies, spiders, centipedes, beetles and any vile creature we generally despise as humans. She tends to touch us and feel our skin as if she is fully conscious and curious about our appearances. Its unnerving indeed.
When a human subject comes across her...the flies come out of her mouth and start biting in the victims flesh. In the subjects from death row we put her against, the flies nibble on the skin to confirm the prey's tastiness and then the flies swarm like locusts around the victim, followed by the centipedes, beetles, cockroaches and spiders. They seem to only eat the flesh of the prey and the flies leave maggots in the exposed organs on the corpses to feast on so the "hive" grow stronger. The clothes are left alone, though tattered and bitten through and the skeleton of the victim is left alone.
More research is needed to add to this..interesting case.
The Hive (c) me
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Comments: 53
InvaderIka In reply to LadyAnnMajora [2014-12-27 23:05:55 +0000 UTC]
XD Go right ahead!
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HorRawrg0d39 [2014-12-27 15:48:50 +0000 UTC]
Freaking' sand flies... I knew they were evil... ^^
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Flying-Mint-Maika In reply to InvaderIka [2014-12-28 13:41:33 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome!!
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VibrantZombie [2014-12-27 13:48:25 +0000 UTC]
I think this might be my favorite concept of yours yet Iks-Β
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Katazumi-Oni [2014-12-27 10:42:52 +0000 UTC]
so it's loosely a combination of Pestillence lore and Beelzebub lore.
I like it, you should continue, maybe make her a high ranking demon maybe due to the ties of bug control to important demonic figures
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CPHUNTER2014 [2014-12-27 03:55:49 +0000 UTC]
Neat idea and concept! Can' t come by a good one these days eh?
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HuskyRBTorchick [2014-12-27 03:53:17 +0000 UTC]
How do you come up with creepy/awesome Creepypasta OCs x3
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HuskyRBTorchick In reply to InvaderIka [2014-12-28 04:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Hm... Magic ? XDΒ
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Heartwork-Circus [2014-12-27 03:49:43 +0000 UTC]
OMF, amazing concept and design, it looks totally badass
I think she may get along well with a new OC I'm working on named Queen Bee fav.me/d8bec8k
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Heartwork-Circus In reply to InvaderIka [2014-12-28 04:27:51 +0000 UTC]
You're so very welcome! cx
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MediatorIridescent [2014-12-27 03:39:44 +0000 UTC]
Whoa.
WHOA
//Gets on plane and flies away
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Wilson-Writings [2014-12-27 03:22:32 +0000 UTC]
*Boards the Nope Train and goes to Screwthatistan* XDDD
Much likes needles, bugs are not my thing XDD But once I get over my squeamishness, I will gladly give her a 12 out of 10 on the creative scale. This concept is one I haven't yet seen, which is downright awesome. Very refreshing.
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bellatoria-rose [2014-12-27 03:22:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow, i really love this concept!
it really reminds me of SCP-439,Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=FSrb_-β¦ , or atleast, what it does to its victim.
((i really like your drawings, too x3)
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InvaderIka In reply to bellatoria-rose [2014-12-28 03:58:44 +0000 UTC]
xDDΒ x3 Thank you!
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TheMangaManiac [2014-12-27 03:20:36 +0000 UTC]
Dude this just gives me shudder Β
so so you did a great job in a Creepypasta !
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InvaderIka In reply to Junabugcreepypastas [2014-12-28 03:58:37 +0000 UTC]
x3 Thank you!
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LadyAnnMajora In reply to InvaderIka [2014-12-28 04:00:21 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. :3
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blazeshard1000 [2014-12-27 03:14:10 +0000 UTC]
Excuse me while I proceed to throw up my dinner.
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PastelGarnet In reply to InvaderIka [2014-12-27 03:13:25 +0000 UTC]
Welcome love, wanna rp
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