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Published: 2010-07-01 05:55:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 889; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description This was fail :/

I got lazy on coloring and didn't feel like putting the words with actual text, so fear my crappy handwriting.

I actually tried to color buuut, well, that woulda' taken another day's free time and I don't have that attention span right now DDD:

Practicing comics was inspired by and 's BloodSport comics xD

Oh how I love BS.

Anyways, this is a not-completely-accurate scene in Em's past...kudos to who knows the shadow irken

PS: don't comment about sketchiness/unclear-ness either....I really got lazy with coloring and making things more obvious, sorry if you actually wanted to understand some parts xD
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Comments: 198

Asteraii [2010-07-04 09:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Paah, don't listen to this moron. I think it looks nice, honestly. I'm much too lazy to make a comic, much less even think about a good plotline xD I think it's great~

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to Asteraii [2010-07-04 15:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! This was just to get a feel of what comics are like, so it won't be continued. It's just practice for now~

I dev.watched you 'cause you have some good art owo

I'll need to go through your gallery some time! xD

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Asteraii In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-04 23:52:56 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome! It's wonderful, I think~ <3

flkwjlf thank you so much! :0! I'll give you one too! Your art is great too <3

I'd be so greatful ;_;

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TheCau [2010-07-03 20:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Hey, 197109! This is you:

AM I DOIN' IT RITE?!?!1?

You're a failure. Just get over the fact that you lost. HARD.

One of my loyal friends uncovered your trap and notified me of your nefarious scheme.

It's so pathetic. You're resorting to the pussy technique of taunting and duping people into clicking a viral Rick-Roll URL just to get back at them. Oh, poor baby, I'm so sorry that your asshole hurts so bad.

I can see you're still sore about all of that verbal raping that you got Friday night. Hell, you've got it so bad that you're bleeding internally.

You brought everything on yourself, douchebag.

Do the whole world a favor and an hero as soon as you get this message.

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 21:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey Cau, read my journal and say if there's anything I need to improve on <3

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 21:23:14 +0000 UTC]

It was epic.

No, wait, MOAR than just epic. It was-- !!!!!1!!111

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 21:26:16 +0000 UTC]

FFF YES. I ALWAYS WANTED TO BE MOAR THAN EPIC!!!!111!1!

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 21:29:09 +0000 UTC]

*throws confetti everywhere*

Oh, and I reported all of his known accounts to the help desk, so hopefully they'll lay down the perma-banhammer on him and we can all be rid of him for the time being.

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 21:40:51 +0000 UTC]

I did the same thing! 8D

GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE! -highfive and insert emote that the commenter is too noob-ish to know how to-

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 21:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, my God, you're right!

It's like we're sharing brainwaves or something!

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 21:44:26 +0000 UTC]

BRAINWAAAAAVES. -sends them-

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 21:45:45 +0000 UTC]

BRAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIINNNNNNNWAAAAAAAAAVESSSSSSSSSS~~~~! >w> -recieves them-

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 21:46:52 +0000 UTC]

...

...

-goes braindead-


I...I need them back! -dies-

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 21:48:51 +0000 UTC]

o.o

NO!!! DON'T DIE!!!

-sends a shitload of brainwaves-

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 21:49:26 +0000 UTC]

-head explodes-

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 21:51:04 +0000 UTC]

._.

...

......

*grabs a mop and starts cleaning up the granules of flesh and bone from the floor*

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 21:55:40 +0000 UTC]

-ghost comes back-

...

.......

Well this sucks D;

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 21:57:28 +0000 UTC]

O.O

Dude.

Wow.

Look at what I was looking at when you said that. [link]

Creepy. It's the brainwaves, Emmeh. Braiiiiinnnnnnwaaaaaavvveessssssss~~~

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 22:00:25 +0000 UTC]

....

Wow.

Uh.

Wow...

....brainwaves Q~Q

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 22:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Has to be. o_O

How else did you know to say "Well this sucks" if I wasn't looking at a deviation with the exact same title?

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-03 22:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Who knows Q~Q

Plus Al also has no body DDD:

BRAINWAVES.

SO WEIRD D:

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InsertTheNameHere [2010-07-03 19:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to InsertTheNameHere [2010-07-03 19:27:28 +0000 UTC]

1: That made no sense and 2: I'm pretty sure I know who you are and what those are, and I'm not falling for it.

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197109 In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 20:15:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah, you probably clicked it already, you naive moron... and if not, then you're just a coward.

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traycon3 [2010-07-01 22:53:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm just gonna go ahead and add that asshole to my blocked list. Trolls don't deserve to have a right to say anything, anyway.

I really liked this. It's cute and really good for someone who hasn't done comic-style before. (Not that I have tried. Last time I did it...failed. Miserably.) I do hope you decide to make more of this comic. I would love to see more into Em's life. :3 She's really a cool Irken. ^^

-t3

P.S. You should totally enter 's contest too. :'D You would totally kick-ass on that!

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to traycon3 [2010-07-01 23:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks xD

She's rather...jerk-ish later in the scene actually...not intentionally, of course >.>;; (lies)

I might do mini comics like this, not in a full order or anything, just mini glimpses. I don't wanna do a full scale comic until I get better P:

Yeaaaah....but he got flamed back, so the comments on here make me laugh. At first he got to me though :/

I WAS PLANNING ON ENTERING THAT CONTEST 8D

I needed to come up with an idea. I sorta' have one now, so I hope to draw it out once I get home x)

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traycon3 In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-01 23:56:37 +0000 UTC]

XDDD Well, minicomics work too. I just like seeing little glimpses into people's lives. :3

Yeah, they can be rather...harsh. But I'm glad they make you laugh now. That's the best thing.

AND YAY! I seriously hope she likes my character. I really had fun designing her. But I'm up against some tough competition and stuff. D:

-t3

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to traycon3 [2010-07-02 00:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know DD:

I'm making a gamble-holic one :/

It'll be fun <3

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traycon3 In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-02 00:05:49 +0000 UTC]

XDDD Mine is a pilot who has "gullible" written across her forehead. :'D Not literally--well, not always. :'D

I'm also gonna make her the janitor she wants. Though I'm trying not to make him Scruffy from Futurama.

-t3

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to traycon3 [2010-07-02 00:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Mine's a navigator/strategist (spelling...bleck, too lazy right now Dx ). I really hope I get time to make him D;

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traycon3 In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-02 00:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Cool. I hope you get to make him too! D: But you have until the 31st, which is good!

-t3

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to traycon3 [2010-07-02 03:46:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm drawing him as we spe-type....as we type. I sorta just doodled, as I didn't know what he'd look like and so far I like him. If Zerna doesn't use him I probably can use him a little xD

He's a sleazy guy <3

31st? Pfft, hell yes I have time. ESPECIALLY 'CAUSE I'LL BE HOOOOOME. Omg I miss home.

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traycon3 In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-02 03:53:47 +0000 UTC]

YAY FOR HOME!!!

And he sounds awesome. I can't wait to see him. <3

Yeah, it's a long contest, thank goodness.

-t3

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TheCau [2010-07-01 08:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Well, Emmeh...

Target Neutralized.

Mission Accomplished.

I salute thee.

Good night~

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to TheCau [2010-07-01 16:41:16 +0000 UTC]

I saw you and Manda' plannin' something...what did you guys do? xDD

I wanna hear about it.

I hope you had fun with all this xD;

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TheCau In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-01 17:22:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I don't remember. I think we were just planning to power-drive Mr. 19's ass into the ground.

We're evil about that.

I did. It made my week.

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enigmatia [2010-07-01 08:15:21 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh! A black and white comic! This is quite reminiscent of *Zerna 's original Blood Sport entry comic.

Durr.. I dunno who that shadow Irken is.. are you happy to hint me on that one? XD

But I have to say, great job of alerting us the scenery with those first few panels! Good comics always set us a scenery rather then just faces and figures in panels, because not everyone can imagine the same environment as what you imagine yourself
An interesting intro! :3

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to enigmatia [2010-07-01 16:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I realized that when I got to panel 3 like "Wait, didn't Zerna do this? o-o "

Shadow irken beeee, Zee. xD

I'm probably not going to continue this, it was just practice and none of the stuff in it is solid anyway.

At first I sorta' felt down 'cause of my first flame a while ago but uh...as you can see he was attacked back.

I'm hoping to get better though, I'll probably try more when I get home where I can do it other than at midnight.

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enigmatia In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-02 00:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it's fine to do it, don't fret that you may be copying her - she must have copied the Greyscale idea from somewhere else, of course!

Ahhhhh! I getcha! But that reminds me.. are you planning on using Invader Zee from the actual show, or are you making your own Zee? I dunnoi if you've been acquainted with this little gal: [link] who was standing in line behind Zim to get a SIR unit XD

That's alright Practice is all well. I say, are they still accepting entries into BSR? If you want more excuse practice, I recommend entering! My first comics I ever worked on to forcefully improve in was in BS. Maybe you can benefit the same as I from entering the competition as well?

Ah.. and I read that now, what a loser =/ I went to the Help Desk and reported that in - did you do the same? Honestly, I don't believe the guy is an artist at all, and is a dipshit to say that dA is a trash site when he still visits it...
The Australian name calling could have been done without I think. Calling out on someone's country isn't too great if you ask me P: There are other ways to tell him off, I'm sure.
But honestly, the guy can't stop you doing anything. Hell he was calling me out on something I do a lot too - draw fanart

Midnight, yes, probably not the best time to concentrate on pictures XD I've been mainly working on drawings nowadays and the mistakes I make... eugh.. you'll see

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to enigmatia [2010-07-02 03:44:03 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUDGE, I didn't know about her o-o -forgot-

I'll have to change his name xD

It was "Zee" because she named a lot after the alphabet (assuming, as it's only the "human/english" version of the alphabet and not real irkens....but net's not go into that right now Dx)

He's still in developmet, thank you for pointing that out. Now I gotta actually be WITTY with his name D:

BSR...? I dunno what that is...or I forgot... >.>

Sorry about the Australian name calling, obviously not intended towards you <3

Nah I didn't go to the help desk...didn't know DA had one xD

I can't wait to get home tomorrow though. I'll have my scanner back, which means I can scan up some pictures! I hope my anime one survives that long, it's starting to seriously smear.

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enigmatia In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-02 06:01:32 +0000 UTC]

That's ok! XD Don't worry too much. You didn't intend the similar name and I can tell that.
Oh you mean how the Irken alphabet has no letter Z? Yeah, I found that weird, especially since their main character Irken has the name of Zim! Hehe, though in Australia, and I'm sure some of the other English speaking countries, we say the letter Z as "zed". Maybe you could work with that? Depends on the personality, Zed is a more masculine sounding name and I don't know if you'd want that.But something to keep in mind if you like the Alphabet thing. Maybe even Zii, or Zea? Your call. Heck, stick with Zee if you want to!

BSR is the sort of "secondary" Blood Sport that came from the original. People who missed out on signing up fore the original Blood Sport can sign up for BSR, or Blood Sport Rising. quite a number of my friends who missed out are trying out, actually! If you still want that excuse for comic practice, that could be your chance ;]

Hehe, naw, it's alright XD I wasn't offended myself, but I'm not too keen on calling out on nationalitys, as that links automatically to race - Asian, European, Australasian, African, wherever. I'd recommend to be careful with those types of name calling, even if the person is total jerk anyway.

Oh! Would you like me to link to it for you? I just hope my submission is enough, because that kind of behavior is not tolerated here the least bit.

Wonderful! I'll look forward to seeing what you have there ^^

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to enigmatia [2010-07-02 17:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Nah, you don't have to link me xD

Apparently a few people have already reported him P:

I'll think of something for him. It's all concept, changes are allowed! D:

WAH. I LOOKED UP THE DUE DATE AND IT'S TOMORROW. FFFF.

I dunno if I can come up with a ref AND comic in one day in a few hours ;~;

adgjasdfsadf

I need to hurry...if I don't make it I can always save a comic for next time Dx

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enigmatia In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-03 03:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Ah that's good ^^

Oh gee it's tomorrow when it's due!? Gosh! If you don't think you can make it, then it's ok You just need a diagram ref and a short comic saying why they're entering, doesn't have to be complicated or wonderful, as long as your actual entries are up to par

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to enigmatia [2010-07-03 16:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Eh, I gave up xD

I'll just wait until next time, maybe make a comic for storage so when it comes out I'll be ready P:

Oh well x3

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Mads-chan [2010-07-01 07:14:29 +0000 UTC]

i agree with pixie and cau and the nightmare gal.
dude needs to chill, and find better things to do than put other people down about their art. and on the internet no less.
she already bloody stated that it was a practice, and a good lot of people think it's damn awesome for a practice.
and it's the first freakin' page!! how can you say it's unoriginal?? she hasn't even revealed anything yet.
i dont really know anything about invader zim and its world, or whoever the hell this vasquez guy is, quite honestly, but this girl is an amazing artist and you trotting in and clucking about with your negativity issues is messed up. thank you and go find yourself something better to do, for goodness sakes...

i for one like this, em (: can't wait ta see more <3

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Invaders-EnEmMi In reply to Mads-chan [2010-07-01 16:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks x3

This might not continue though, it's just practice, not the actual comic. I might do ONE other page just 'cause there's an ending to this scene. If I find more time (I'm comin' home this weekend so I BETTER have time).

Thank you for standing up for me >w<

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Mads-chan In reply to Invaders-EnEmMi [2010-07-01 17:55:19 +0000 UTC]

awww and it was just getting to the good part! haha
you're comin' back?? SWEET hit me up girl we need to chill sometime this summer, and i leave for japan in...two weeks...ish?
and no problema, i think the three other ladies kinda beat me to chewing the guy out, but hey i read it, he pissed me off, so i left a comment win-win situation, babay!

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pixiesmooch [2010-07-01 06:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Hey mister 19-whatever-whatever~

You're insulting my friend which is rather distasteful considering she's a great artist and it seems you don't even draw.

I'm not one for talking smack on the internet because it's idiotic but honestly keep your thoughts to yourself or at least use it on the people who actually do disgrace Vasquez's style (i.e. the furries?).

So, in short, stop being a mean-y or I'll take a look at the terms and services of DA, if you're going to critique then don't be a dick about it.

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TheCau In reply to pixiesmooch [2010-07-01 06:46:35 +0000 UTC]

I love you, 'Manda. I really do.

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pixiesmooch In reply to TheCau [2010-07-01 07:08:03 +0000 UTC]

I love you tooooo <3333

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