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InvaderSaik — Sketches: Al and... Who?

Published: 2010-03-31 09:07:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 982; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 18
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Description Hey, some more sketches I did a while ago. This time, it's Alowitz... And, wait, who's that?

Oh, that's his daughter, Ellerslie (Leslie for short). Though in the present time where my storyline is currently set, she's a little kid, maybe 5 or 6 years old (In a human age comparison).
Oh yeah. And she's a Vortken.


The corner of Nizerei's eye twitched. Alowitz wrung his beret nervously in his hands, flinching as she shot her most deadly glare in his direction. "I don't believe this" she sighed angrily. "I knew you were stupid as soon as I got you, but no, you had to go top yourself and knock up a Vortian first chance you get on the outside" Alwoitz chewed his lip, his expression a mixture of several different ones, one of which Nizerei suspected was pride, another part guilt, and a third... "Oh fuck me" she sighed again, massaging her forehead, "You actually love that chick don't you? You realise if anyone finds out about this there'll be investigations. The empire doesn't like half-breeds"


And thus, even though he makes so many hundred thousands of monies from gambling, Al remains in the military. If he dropped out suddenly, in his prime, they'd probably suspect and launch an investigation. He can't be promoted because the control brain'd scan his PAK memory, and find out. He's totally stuck where he is, but at least he looks after his kid. I'm not sure whether to make an identity for the Vortain mother or not, but she isn't really all that important.
Nizerei is covering his ass, but she doesn't hesitate to kick him for his "Total cluster-fuck", as she calls it, every now and then. Callous already knows and doesn't really care, but Bet's new to the team and hasn't a clue.

Leslie in the future becomes a brilliant gambler like her father, but works in a cafe as a cover (the tattoo on her brow is her waitressing number, like a workers ID or something). She tends to be rather spoilt, but not overly obnoxious (Just a touch), and is good at talking her way both into and out of situations, though her teenage immaturity often gets the better of her. Alowitz managed to get her a PAK through some of his "friends", and it functions generally as well as any irkens, though not quite as precise due to the changes in her overall anatomy because of her Vortian blood. She doesn't see much of her father, but doesn't really care what he does. He sends her monies, she triples it through gambling, the universe keeps expanding. They don't tend to see each other much due to Al spending his time in the army, but they get along well when together (unless they start playing card games).
Due to having not much of a connection with her mother, Leslie tends to associate with more Irkens than Vortains, but has plenty of insults for those who judge her based on her mixed species.
Leslie also happens to have a connection to Monarch, but I won't say what that is C:

Leslie, Al C me.
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Comments: 25

Zxi-Lesk [2011-05-11 11:13:11 +0000 UTC]

*Hmm, A Young Dark Fleet Vortian Ship Commander sets down his Cafe Menu, and continues reading his guide book about places to go around Saik 7. He notices out of the corner of his eyes a very Beautiful & Cute Vortken waitress, Rtas Uszenc gives a warmful smile to her and continues reading. She is very cute and he wouldnt mind taking her on a date*.

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InvaderSaik In reply to Zxi-Lesk [2011-05-16 09:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Said Vortken waitress is underage, but would happily consent to go out with said man in later years so long as he can contend with her overprotective father, has a lot of money and doesn't mind a bit of a gamble.

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Zxi-Lesk In reply to InvaderSaik [2011-05-16 10:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Rtas Uszenc is a card shark and has never lost a game before.His family are a well know group of merchants and his is quite rich. Uszenc is only 18 [in human years]. He can handle Alwoitz.

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adorablepunk [2010-05-20 23:18:38 +0000 UTC]

ooo pretty vortken i has one too, but he isnt so pretty...

eli: funny.

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InvaderSaik In reply to adorablepunk [2010-05-21 02:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Awww, poor kid XD

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adorablepunk In reply to InvaderSaik [2010-05-21 04:41:48 +0000 UTC]

eh he doesnt care much

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AngryKiwi [2010-04-02 23:41:50 +0000 UTC]

Gamblers, YAY! My younger brother was the one who taught me poker! My dad tired once I somehow couldn't get the hang of it at the time...XD

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InvaderSaik In reply to AngryKiwi [2010-04-04 08:58:36 +0000 UTC]

XD I have no clue how to play poker, honestly XD My best game is just Kings&As...

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DiabloZERO-GodofHell [2010-03-31 23:35:18 +0000 UTC]

stealin' my thunder with the extra horns thing--

Loooove her design as well as the backstory. It's well thought out, you're so good at that.
The various expressions in the pictures are well done too.

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InvaderSaik In reply to DiabloZERO-GodofHell [2010-03-31 23:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh crap, I am aren't I? D8
You be subconciously influencing my artzz. Freeeaaaky.

Thanks, I really enjoy making backstories because it explains why a character is the way they are. That, and I'm all like, insane and stuff 8D
Heh, I totally love how Leslie's eye-rolling expression came out. She's probably all like- "Daaa-aaad, you know I can look after myself right?"

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CharlottexZim [2010-03-31 21:34:02 +0000 UTC]

too much to read in the description! X_x; i'll get a round to reading it tho! XD;

anyway, Ellersile looks hella cool! 8D

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InvaderSaik In reply to CharlottexZim [2010-04-01 00:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Warning, text wall ahead XD

Thanks CB

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CharlottexZim In reply to InvaderSaik [2010-04-02 00:24:11 +0000 UTC]

reasd it all! it was a nice and interesting story! c: couldn't typed more buttt..it's late and i'mma teird! X_x;

np! XD

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InvaderSaik In reply to CharlottexZim [2010-04-02 10:07:00 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks C:

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CharlottexZim In reply to InvaderSaik [2010-04-03 19:49:17 +0000 UTC]

np C:

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avatarjk137 [2010-03-31 19:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh, Al, you fuckup.

Nice poses, and I really like Leslie's look!

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InvaderSaik In reply to avatarjk137 [2010-03-31 20:35:30 +0000 UTC]

XD Nizerei will never let him forget it, ever.

C: Thankyou, I'm actually rather fond of her design.

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Zerna [2010-03-31 17:19:02 +0000 UTC]

oooohoohoo Al you dog. xD I didn't think of him as that sort of guy. I mean, yes a gambler, yes a risk-taker, but not to THAT degree. xD

At least Tex sticks within his own species.

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InvaderSaik In reply to Zerna [2010-03-31 20:30:56 +0000 UTC]

And there's the part where Al starts bragging to Tex about... Stuff XD
Well, he's still mildly young and stupid (if her were human, he'd proabably be in his twenties). But, he really did fall in love with her, and he really does care for his child and he's learned his lesson and will never ever do it again... Not.

XD this is true.

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Zerna In reply to InvaderSaik [2010-04-01 22:55:38 +0000 UTC]

mmmmmmriiiiiiight. |D

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gdpr-2852538 [2010-03-31 16:25:36 +0000 UTC]

OoOOoh, cooooool

Love Leslie's design, especially her horns having an extra pair

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InvaderSaik In reply to gdpr-2852538 [2010-03-31 20:33:49 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thankyou C:

Heh, the extra pair of horns was a random idea, but it made her look a bit more adventurous as a person, perhaps.

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angeloflove18 [2010-03-31 14:04:56 +0000 UTC]

ccccccccccoooooooollllllll i still wish i could draw like you your so good at it you can even do folds in the clothes awesome faving even if its a sketch

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InvaderSaik In reply to angeloflove18 [2010-03-31 20:33:01 +0000 UTC]

XD aww, thanks C:

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angeloflove18 In reply to InvaderSaik [2010-04-01 01:42:32 +0000 UTC]

you welcome

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