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Broken Heart
By Invader Sal
I was walking, it was pretty cold out. I wonder if I'm dead…
I looked up, there was my Green Base. The gnomes were covered in snow. I followed the circular foot prints in the snow to the front door.
Maybe I'm Dying and this is just a memory going through my mind…
I opened the door. There was GIR, robot GIR, sitting on the couch watching TV.
He looked at me with his big cyan eyes.
"HIYA, MASTER!!" He jumped up and began to run towards me.
Why had I run to Dib's house, without a disguise?! Why had I been so stupid as to go to my enemy's home without a disguise, without a thought of what the hell I was doing?
I went down to catch GIR as he jumped into my arms. But suddenly the 2 feet between us became 20, then 200, then 2,000.
"MASTER!" He cried. "Where'd you go where are you?! Come Back!! I'm Sorry!!"
I jumped up from my sleep. "GIR?!" I looked around. This wasn't my house…
I looked at the walls, they were a tinted blue and it had a large TV on it. The couch under was a Tan. I began to recognize where I was. This was Dib's house…
Why was I asleep on his couch? In His living room and not in some hospital waiting to be experimented on?!
I heard foot steps, I laid back down and pretended I was asleep.
Soon there was someone over me, there hand moved down under the cushion I was on and pulled something out.
The TV was flipped on and they sat down in the little space left on the couch.
More foot steps were coming. I winced at the thought of who it could be.
"Is he still sleeping?" It was a female voice. Dib's sister?
"Yeah…" That was Dib's voice.
I wanted to open my eyes, but fear took over and kept them closed.
"It's been two days, Dib. He's probably dead, just throw him out and let me sit back down on my couch!" She was angry…
"He's alive, Gaz, And it's the middle of winter. Plus, he has a broken leg, he WOULD die if I left him out there!"
"Then just get his stupid friend and have him bring him back to his house?!"
"I can't find GIR anywhere and every time I tried to get him in his base, it attacked me!"
"I CAN GET MYSELF HOME!!" I lifted myself up. "I DON'T NEED THE BASTARD TO GET ME THERE!!" I set my legs down on the ground and suddenly felt a sudden pain.
"Whoa, Zim, steady on the moving…" Dib lifted my legs up back onto the couch and returned to watching the TV.
I leaned back into the couch. "Why am I here?"
"Because you have a broken leg and I'm pretty sure you heard the rest."
I gave him a death glare and then tried to get my spider legs out. They wouldn't come out.
"What the-?!"
Dib looked at me. "Oh, yeah, I placed tape on your backpack thing so you couldn't put those weapons out."
"TAKE IT OFF SO I CAN GO HOME!!"
"No way, Zim! I'm not gonna let you do anything stupid!"
"Why?!" I yelled, trying to get the tape off. "I thought you wanted me dead!!"
"I called truce in till everything's back to normal…" Dib started to flip through the channels. He seemed calm, even with me in his house.
I laid back down, I guess I was in no danger for right now. But I had to keep my guard up, Dib was crafty and he could change his mind about a truce.
I stared at the TV for the longest time before anyone spoke
"So, why'd you come here?" Dib said with a sigh.
"None of your business… Maybe I just wanted to kill you…"
"Kill me? You wouldn't go 1 foot out your door without a disguise just to kill me, Zim. You're stupid, but not that stupid. Now, tell me why…"
I stared at the ceiling. Was there really a reason? Yes, she had taken him!
"He's mine, no one else's…Not hers, mine…" I whispered and closed my eyes. "How could he chose her over me? I've always been there and do everything to protect him and she… she slapped him and had her friends beat him!"
Dib gave me a sympathetic look and nodded. I began to scream, I didn't care anymore!
"I LOVED THAT STUPID ROBOT TO DEATH AND HE JUST LEFT!!! THAT FOOL!! WITHOUT ME HE'D BE DEAD!! AND WITHOUT ME HE WILL DIE OF THAT STUPID SICKNESS!! And…" I Pulled at my antennas and began to scream my head off, which soon turned into tearful sobs. "and it's my fault…" I leaned my head into the side of the couch, how could one little thing cause ME to show emotion? How could it cause ME to care about it and admit my mistakes…"Just bring me to a hospital…"
"No…" Dib stood up and began to go up the stairs.
"WHY WON'T YOU?! AND WHY ARE YOU LEAVING, EARTHSTINK?!"
"Cause no hospitals gonna save you from a broken heart…And my words won't rid you of your regrets…"

"DIB!! I'M HUNGRY, AGAIN!!" I said, flinging  the fifth plate of waffles I had that day on the pile.
"GOD, ZIM!! WHATS WRONG WITH YOU?!"
"I'm hungry…" I smirked. "I expect 8 waffles on a plate in…um…3 minutes…"
"I thought your bones healed fast!!!"
"They do…if I put a chemical into my bloodstream…but, since I can't get into my base, you'll just have to take care of me for a month…"
Dib sighed and went back in the kitchen. "You're a bitch, Zim…"
"You're the one who insisted on keeping me here so I couldn't, lets see, 'do something stupid'? So, you just have to deal with it!" I began to laugh as he brought out the eight waffles. He placed them on my chest and began to walk towards the kitchen again. "I'm going to hit myself for this truce…" Dib mumbled as he walked out.
I grabbed the remote and began to flip through the channels.
It was quite quiet, except for the TV, in till Gaz came down and went into the kitchen. I turned down the sound, I liked to hear the screams and taunts at Dib. But, today, they were actually talking. I listened closely so I wouldn't miss a word.
"Why aren't you getting rid of him yet?"
"I would if I could, Gaz, but I can't find GIR…"
"Like I want that ungrateful bastard," I mumbled. "I hope I never see him again."
"Your not going to find him, he's been gone for the past week! He probably went to Mexico with that girlfriend of his!" Gaz in a heartless tone.
"I doubt it, Gaz, he's way to much of Zim's baby to ever leave him. I'm actually amazed that he hasn't been tearing the our house apart just to find Zim."
"Well, where would he be?"
"Hiding, probably, he did do a number on Zim and-" he stopped and went closer to Gaz and began to talk in a whisper, as if I wouldn't hear. "It's eating Zim alive…"
"What does that mean?"
"Have You Looked At Him, Gaz?! He's lost weight, even though he made me gone to the store 18 TIMES for waffle mix! His eyes have sunk down into there sockets! And he's a sickening pale green! I can't even do anything anymore to help him…The poor guy…" He sighed and began to walk back. "I don't even know why I care if he lives or dies…Maybe because this is my fault…"
DING-DONG! DING-DONG! DING-DONG!
"I'll be right there!" Dib yelled as he went to the door.
No! My head yelled. I'm dying because I want to, not because of that fucking robot!! I looked around quickly and saw a knife on the table.
And I'm ending it…Not because of GIR, because I hate this and I'm in pain and I don't like pain… I tried to stand myself up as I grabbed the knife.
"Dib…"
Dib was just about to open the door before he went into a gasp.
The knife was right by my neck, a little blood trickling down my neck.
"Zim, calm yourself. Lets talk about this."
"I DON'T WANT TO TALK!!!"  I began to cut a little more.
"ZIM, DON'T DO THIS TO YOURSELF, IT'S NOT WORTH IT!!"
"I DON'T CARE, YOU FILTHY HUMAN!!"
I finally sliced my neck and fell to the ground.
The door suddenly slammed opened and there was a shrill cry
two feet pounded towards and two freezing hands held me and I…
End Of Part 15
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Comments: 18

zatr123456 [2012-07-30 18:18:02 +0000 UTC]

wow that's so sad

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gir131 [2012-01-28 21:54:43 +0000 UTC]

how..
this is fantastic, you are far superior to many established authors

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FantasyDreamer16 [2011-04-05 20:21:01 +0000 UTC]

More? Pretty please with waffles on top?

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InvaderSal In reply to FantasyDreamer16 [2011-04-05 20:22:47 +0000 UTC]

XD You Still Got 2 More Chapters I Think, But Sadly this Fanfic was Discontiued.

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FantasyDreamer16 In reply to InvaderSal [2011-04-05 20:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Aww, pfft I didn`t even see the others lol. Anyways, you are an awesome writer! Awesome job!

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InvaderSal In reply to FantasyDreamer16 [2011-04-05 20:51:10 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank You!

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FantasyDreamer16 In reply to InvaderSal [2011-04-06 09:34:37 +0000 UTC]

You`re welcome.^^

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KaitlynAnn [2011-02-18 03:23:22 +0000 UTC]

That is really good. Poor heart broken Zim though.

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InvaderSal In reply to KaitlynAnn [2011-02-18 03:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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KaitlynAnn In reply to InvaderSal [2011-02-18 03:53:15 +0000 UTC]

You should continue the story. I really want to see what happens next. You did a very awsome job.

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InvaderSal In reply to KaitlynAnn [2011-02-18 03:56:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, I Will, But The Next Chapters On Another Computer.

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KaitlynAnn In reply to InvaderSal [2011-02-18 04:18:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh i see, still great story very intence. I like it.

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InvaderSal In reply to KaitlynAnn [2011-02-18 04:29:58 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank You

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KaitlynAnn In reply to InvaderSal [2011-02-18 04:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome, I'm writing a story about invader zim too. It's about Zim having a family; a mom named Queen Aldondria, a dad maned King Zaleon, a sister named Xinn, a brother named Zap, and ferternal twins Keena and Keeto(both only 5 years old). I am on chapter 9, now. I can't wait to finish it.

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InvaderSal In reply to KaitlynAnn [2011-02-18 05:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Cool ^^

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KaitlynAnn In reply to InvaderSal [2011-02-18 05:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Yep

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Celebi9 [2011-01-16 05:54:58 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad! Nice job!

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InvaderSal In reply to Celebi9 [2011-01-16 06:15:43 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks!

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