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Published: 2001-01-30 10:11:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 631; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 135
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Description This peice was inspired by a near tragedy today , my 17 year old sister attempted suicide , and its been on my mind all day , i " speak out " my thoughts in my work , hope someone enjoys it.

-loco

Pain inside , kept well hidden
But over the years ,
The pain hath risen

Not knowing where to turn
I leave my soul in constant churn
wondering why , she had to die..

Life took its toll
Charged her every penny
Even took her soul
And filled it with pity

A sharp pain hit my heart
As i watched her increment body hit the ground
Suddenly i realized , Death had come to town.

At such a tender age i could not understand
But now i know , its all in the sands.
Sands that flow , like dust in the wind,
As Death shows his ugly grin

Those same sands , start to fall
The minute your born , a baby so small.
The sands have time cannot be stopped
All her little dreams , suddenly docked.

Like a ship on its last sail
She looked around to realize , life is hell.
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Comments: 7

katana-dk [2001-07-17 11:11:27 +0000 UTC]

The guy in the corner looks spunky...

This is a good picture - text or not
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kalimon [2001-01-31 02:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice WP...


I don't know what to say...

but I think today you have become stronger


just hope you don't break



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kar0 [2001-01-30 17:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Definately feelin this. *sigh* Very emotional.

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mike45 [2001-01-30 15:52:13 +0000 UTC]

GOOD JOB!

Mike Schmitt
m_e_schmitt@hotmail.com
http://www.liquid2k.com/m_e_schmitt

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dorkside [2001-01-30 14:58:57 +0000 UTC]

.....

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pyper [2001-01-30 12:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful piece, well done!

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isonica [2001-01-30 10:20:15 +0000 UTC]

This is great. The poetry is very good: Sands that flow , like dust in the wind,
As Death shows his ugly grin

It is as if death is a figure that preys on teenagers, taunting them to take their own lives.

isonica.com

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