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The moon was shinning in the midnight sky, illuminating a sandy clearing, in the middle of a pine forest. A large figure slipped out of the shadows, "Brightfire! I'm here!" spoke the dark brown tom. "Barkstar! What took you so long?" Another cat had joined him, leaping out of a young tree. "I... I was called for a meeting... by... by Willowstar," Barkstar replied. "Willowstar? What was it about?" Brightfire rushed. "A... p-prophicie," he mumbled.Related content
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FluffyKitten1313 [2013-02-18 03:52:43 +0000 UTC]
Sounds cool!
Everyone's gotta love dem prophecies! :3
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VectorSigma101 [2013-02-15 00:43:08 +0000 UTC]
LOL, you spelled 'prophecy' wrong. XD
It's a very good prologue, and it has one of my favorite features: CLIFFHANGERS!!!!
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iOS6 In reply to VectorSigma101 [2013-02-15 16:15:12 +0000 UTC]
Oops! Thanks! I love cliffhangers! Unless I am reading a story with them... *hint* *hint* jks! The 1st chapter will be much longer, so don't worry!
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VectorSigma101 In reply to iOS6 [2013-02-15 18:20:06 +0000 UTC]
LOL
YAY!!
And, don't worry about spelling errors. A few days ago, I realized that I spelled "Forbidden" wrong in Chapter 4 (which I posted two months ago. XD) and the Chapter 17 Preview. LOL. So it read "The Foribidden : Chapter 4". DX
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iOS6 In reply to VectorSigma101 [2013-02-16 11:59:38 +0000 UTC]
I'll be on holiday in France for 5 days soon, and I'll have no access to the internet, so I'll probably write more than just Chapter 1. But you'll have to wait!
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VectorSigma101 In reply to iOS6 [2013-02-16 14:08:24 +0000 UTC]
DX
Have fun in France! So jealous! XD
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iOS6 In reply to VectorSigma101 [2013-02-23 00:39:17 +0000 UTC]
It was cool, but I nearly died of 'No-Internet Fever'. I'm better now. I don't think I mentioned that I have a rabbit. I think I squeezed him to death when I first saw him... I hope he's ok...
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VectorSigma101 In reply to iOS6 [2013-02-23 01:05:54 +0000 UTC]
LOL
YOU HAVE A BUNNY? Coolio!
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iOS6 In reply to VectorSigma101 [2013-02-25 20:46:37 +0000 UTC]
XD I do! Shall I post a pic of him?
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iOS6 In reply to VectorSigma101 [2013-02-27 06:33:39 +0000 UTC]
He's even cute in real life! XD 'Cause he MOVES!
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