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IrisCanine — First Animation - Finished
Published: 2007-07-06 00:56:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1461; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 508
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It's finished! Hit "Download" to see it!Holy moose!!! My first animation!!! 14 Frames long.
Feel free to critique. ^^
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Very good first try! It took me a couple weeks to do something like this when I first started... so many years ago lol! sorry, just recalling it. Though some of the frames where a little improportioned, I expect you'll fix it if you upload this to a computer. Very good overall! Bravo, especially to such a young artist!
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Thanks! It's actually from two years ago. I've improved a bit since then, but none of my newer stuff is up.
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That was very well done for a first time animation, epspecially it being a traditional animation piece, it's far easier to start in flash and work backwards from there into traditional lol
The movement was really quite off, but you can still see what you are trying to achieve, keep up the practise and you're bound to be an awesome animator in no time
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Thank you! I'm actually an animator for the Wolf Movie. [link]
I don't do any really big movements like this, just little background characters, but I'm learning a lot.
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Wow! That's really quite awesome
I'm working on a film at the moment too ^___^ [link]
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Maybe make it so it loops on the same rock or circle thing. So the wolf just jumps from the rock to... the same rock to... the same rock. If you edited the scans and made it so the background was a solid white field it would download faster. (I'm a shrew about download times)
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Thanks for the critique! I haven't really looked at this in a while, but I probably will redo it when I get more experience with animation. I'll keep your comments in mind. ^^
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Did you hit download on the left?
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o lol didn't see that! its great
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I think it could use a touch more movement in the forequarters and a few more frames, but it's really cool!
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DANG, it's awesome!!
You should really color it, digitally or traditionally.
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That's what I'm doing right now. Thanks! ^^
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wow, thats amazing! Nicely done, very good for your first animation
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Awesome 8D And only seven frames? It looks more to me cx But awesome nonetheless.
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It's fourteen, now. I made it longer. ^^ Thanks for the comment.
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ah wow, that so cool 
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I'm not sure if I'm going to color it yet. I am going to apply for the Wolf Movie, so this is my animation sample for my application.
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No, it is. I did a flipbook in sixth grade, but other than that, this is my first. ^^ It took me a while though.
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I looks great! Awesome job!
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You did great on this so it is worht the fav! AMAZING JOB HUN!
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very awesome for a first time. are you going to color it? =]
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I really don't know if I'm going to color it yet. I am going to apply for the Wolf Movie, and they say they want an animation sample when applying. I'll probably finish this and do another one before sending them my application.
Thanks for the comment. ^^
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