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tremorfireheart [2013-09-11 12:32:28 +0000 UTC]

The great.

the first thing I noticed was the lovely color display .you really have matured in that.

the things that need improvement.

  there are some issues. she feels off balanced like she will be falling off to the left here any second. Because of the shading one breast looks bigger than the other. also i'm wondering on where the light Is coming from. you have the bottom of the feet lighted up, you have a straight left light on most of the left side, you have an upper left light on the hair and for the eyes, boob on the right and right leg you have a direct light on them. The shoulders feel too boxy as if you put the line down for where the shoulders are going to line up but you forgot the neck muscle.

some other things I liked.

I liked the tones on her stomach. the way the hand on the right is done. and I really like all the textures that went into the background.

also I will be posting art up soon so you can rip it a new one.

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KarToon12 [2013-08-15 14:00:11 +0000 UTC]

I really like the pose and design.    Is this supposed to be an older version of her?

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