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isabel10 — Tykki X Allen raw scetch dGrayMan
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Published: 2013-09-02 19:33:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 910; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 0
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I originally drew just some random character again,but i liked the pose and decided to change them
into my favorite D.Gray Man pairing.
But Tykki´s face sure was a pain in the ass....
I´m sure, i will change some things when i color this,
so feel free to point out things that feel off.
(The characters don´t belong to me.
It´s merely a fan art of D.Gray Man.
Credit belongs to the autor Hoshino, Katsura-sama)
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Comments: 8
Great sketch, and excellent pose. xD
As for me, you don't need to change anything.
Yaoi
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The pose looks great, the hands are epic and it's yaoi
The only complaint is the sharp angle of one of the faces (the guy who's on the other's lap) Maybe make it a little less solid looking?
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T_T
i don´t know how...
Maybe a lot later with more practice, right now that´s the best i can do with the faces,
but i think it will look different anyway when i color it.
And thank you for the comment^^
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you need to be careful with how you draw the mark on the arm because from far away it looks more like a thin arm and a fancy shirt design, you also chose a difficult angle for his face so it came out a little bit off, however the pose came out great, your anatomy is spot on and I love the hands, I wish I could draw hands like you
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Yeah you are right.
I think i will make the glove just black without a design.
Sometimes "less is more".
I don´t think i can do anything about the face thought.
If i move Allen closer, you won´t even see his eye and farther away to draw his face
properly, would make it impossible to french kiss.
That would be sad. lol
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his face will be fine if you leave it and yeah, you should keep some design but make it a little simpler
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