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Iscariot-Priest — My geeky haiku notepad
Published: 2009-05-26 10:28:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1591; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 85
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For ~moyanII 's Haiku Notepad contest. And yes that's my manly writing
Didn't use most of the haiku written there (they're mostly first drafts). However, if you're curious, the scribbles on the page are:
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sprouting
from a paddy field
a plane
no breakfast
spin class
dry hurl
no dinner
club hopping
wet hurl
cold morn' / after
cold shower / colder shower
hot coffee / colder coffee
summer sun
through rainclouds
gives no warmth
how miserable!
this meal
for one
running
up an escalator
a child
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The rest is haiku theory based on concepts thought by Basho.
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whoa, i've never really been a big fan of haiku but dem scribbles be heavy stuff. oh and i actually thought the parts where it's all "no breakfast, spin class, dry hurl" and "no dinner, club hopping, wet hurl" were funny... i can totally imagine it happening.
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Thanks, and yeah no reason why haiku can't be funny, humans are funny people.
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Oh wow! Really shows the process. Good luck on the contest!
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Thank, it just so happened this page had some theory on it, usually it's a just bunch of first drafts all over the place.
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Ha ha, it really isn't - just looks like that because it isn't the full picture. I'll post something more comprehensible once I finish learning about it.
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