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IRUKA-SENSEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!! Btw, who the heck is that girl??!
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lol XD I'm assuming you read the doujinshi up to the fourth Chapter at least so you probably already know
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thank you so much! 
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Naruto Doujinshi, as it said in the comment of the previous page. xD;;
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over all colour is dark blue but the hood part is light blue ^^
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thank you *goes to work*
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oooooo you draw really well! i love your comic so far! hehe
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Hello again. Oooh, excellent job on the first two panels. Great art. In the last one, the shape of the girl's head is a bit awkward. To the left (my left, that is) her head kind of has a lump which I think was a result of her hair. You'll want to be careful of that in the future. Also, Naruto's arm seems a bit short. The part of his arm under the elbow is very skant, which isn't good porportioning. It may have been an effect or something that didn't come across just right. But don't worry; I'm nitpicking again so it really isn't that noticeable. Just be careful of those things. ^^
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That's Asuka ^^ You'll know more about her as I submit more pages
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