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Who am I?I can't be this
This thing
Blistered palms
Tentative grip
Am I these eyes?
This breath?
A last breath
On a solitary step
Is there sight behind these eyes
When it's all inside my mind..?
Who am I?
I can't be this
This creature
A matted clump
With broken arms
Am I these thoughts?
This breath?
A last breath
On a solitary step
Is there love inside these thoughts?
Or are there only thoughts of death?
Who am i?
I can't be this
This thing
When you are gone
And there's nothing left
Am I these memories?
Of battlefields and death
Of dust and your last breath
And does love exist
Is it real
When there's no one left?
Who am I?
I can't be this
This creature
Consumed by grief
A broken body
And are you with me?
I can't see through these eyes
I can't see through these thoughts
I can't see through these memories
Of battlefields and death
Of that dust and your last breath.
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Comments: 7
Living-Meme [2011-02-18 14:49:19 +0000 UTC]
This is lovely work. This song is potent and valuable to me. The world seems to cause a lot of us to doubt the existence of love a bright future, as usual.
I'm lost, but I like finding songs like this on my journey.
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IsolationRow In reply to Living-Meme [2011-02-19 03:49:54 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou very much for your lovely feedback. I really appreciate it.
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Living-Meme In reply to IsolationRow [2011-02-19 09:09:50 +0000 UTC]
You're always welcome. Before I meant to write: "love and a bright future...". I can be confusing. You understood my 1st comment, anyway.
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IsolationRow In reply to Living-Meme [2011-02-19 09:57:23 +0000 UTC]
I understood. No confusion thus far
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hentaimaster [2011-02-15 11:30:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is so good, i love the progression through it
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hentaimaster In reply to IsolationRow [2011-02-15 11:39:05 +0000 UTC]
my pleasure, look forward to more
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