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IsolationRow — Bizarre Proposal
Published: 2011-03-08 10:49:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description Lover, lover, let me return to your heart
For far too long we've been apart
I'm struggling out here in the cold
My heart is here for you to hold

Lover, lover, I want to come home today
I'm sorry my heart went astray
I've been so lonely since I went
My darling I'm here to repent

Lover, lover, my heart is a haemorrhage
I plead guilt to what you allege
All I see is your heart shining
All day long I have been pining

Lover, lover, you're my only salvation
I pledge to make the migration
To be your love, to be your wife
To live within your soul for life.
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Comments: 6

THE-EGO [2011-03-21 09:44:58 +0000 UTC]

this is a nice change of pace from what i have been reading from you. i like the positive inflection

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IsolationRow In reply to THE-EGO [2011-03-21 12:08:27 +0000 UTC]

I like to break it up a bit every now and then

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creaking-door [2011-03-16 15:27:25 +0000 UTC]

A maiden's plea from the heart. A silky poem told wih honest emotion. Well written,

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TouchAndGlance [2011-03-09 18:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Aww that's so sweet, the simple structure works with the strict rhythm of the poem. Very well written. ^^

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Radraversion2 [2011-03-08 13:06:50 +0000 UTC]

awwwwww.....that sounds sweet....for u.

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IsolationRow In reply to Radraversion2 [2011-03-08 13:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha thankyou

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