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IsolationRow — Poem No 2 - Rape
Published: 2011-02-18 11:23:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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7 years ago today is what you took from me7 years that don't belong, stolen by you three
7 years of guilt and shame at what I did not do
7 years like yesterday, and still I can't get through
I've lost 7 years today, the anniversary of my death
And though I walk I cannot talk, you've stolen every breath
15 years old I was, now 22 I still feel like a whore
Stumbling round through corridors and staring at the floor
Every tear torn from my eyes by 3 men standing tall
I can't decide why I feel so wrong and why I took the fall
You broke my body. You broke my heart. You broke my soul
Tore me up and smashed me down just like a blow up doll
And every year I wonder why I still cannot escape
7 hollow, hellish years given for 2 hours of rape.
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Comments: 6
There is emotion here, and a feeling of reality. This is great expression. I rarely comment on something written and suggest a change, but here it goes. As I read it, it all read like it went together. I mean all the words and phrases sounded right. One line sounded better when I read it to myself as, "You broke my body. You broke my heart. You broke my soul." So take it or not, either way, well done.
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I was actually thinking I would do this and never got around to it. I will now. Thankyou very much
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oh well youre quite welcome
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This is important to read. No one should misuse/abuse an innocent or confused being. This is a tale of mental and spiritual torture, not only physical.
Thanks for sharing your words.
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Thankyou for reading it.
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