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ithethreeinsanity — I Plus You Equals More of Me
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Published: 2011-01-05 01:11:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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I, the three, Insanity,I plus you equals more of me.
Whatever you want you'll never get,
Left to death with the surrogate,
Sanity likes blood streaming let,
Leeches sucking all of it.
I, the three, Insanity,
I plus you equals more of me,
You can't believe it,
It worse than what's seen,
When eye for eye,
Tooth for tooth,
I plus you equals me.
What is it you want really?
Why be whisked away by mere feeling,
For it's the assassin that leaves you reeling,
And pain feeling, comfort stealing.
Because I am the three
I am insanity,
I plus you,
And you plus I,
Will only equal more of me.
Do you like insanity?
Do you want more cups of tea?
Have them all, have them with me!
Enjoy my insanity.
Because I am three
When I'm not one,
And two I used to be,
Don't you hate it,
I just praise it,
I plus you
Equals more of me.
It's so strange, so amazed,
You don't have a clue,
I can only think it be the worse,
If you plus I,
Equaled more of you.
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Comments: 3
I'm not sure about rhyming 'really' with 'reeling' in the fourth stanza. Also the third last line, "I can only think it be the worse", doesn't make sense to me.
Do you mean "I can only think it would be worse"?
Otherwise, I very much like it. All your poems have a slight off-beat which really hits you in the face and makes you take notice. It's very clever.
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This is actually a newer poem about my name, the original birthplace of my pseudonym is actually from "I The Three and Blaine The Meek." I just posted it up deviantART
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