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Ithfifi — Lochlann Ref Sheet +shortSTORY

Published: 2010-03-25 23:05:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 969; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 19
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Description :3 Kinda like how he came out, I don't tend to make characters often!

The Curse of Lochlann (small cruddy story) ~~

Some time in the 18th century, Lochlann was a human male, his human name was Henry. He was
17 years old. He was the man of the house, having lost his father to illness, with four sisters and a baby brother and an elderly mother Henry Had to provide for
The family. Avalei, an old and seemingly ageless woman who lived at the other end of the village, known for her blooming flowers and flourishing crops even during the coldest winters had been keeping a strong eye on Henry. She knew the family where struggling to survive despite Henrys hard work. The little money he was able to get seemed to give him bad luck. The cow he had managed to afford died the day after purchasing it. The seeds he had bought after that where devoured by slugs. A day came when Avalei walked into her garden. She saw several chickens missing, her crops where ripped from the ground. It just so happened to be the day that Henry was walking past her garden.
She questioned him, suspicious of his antics. He was calm and not afraid of the old lady, telling her he had been to market but not been able to afford the pennies for the loaf of bread. She asked him about the missing chickens and corn, and didn’t believe his honest answer.
Still, she invited him inside. And locked the door. Henry sat on the small wooden chair, waiting for the jug of Ale she had promised him for all his bad luck.

“I know you stole me belongings Henry. I don’t approve of stealing…Nor do I believe in the petty punishment of being hung.” He pleaded his case but it fell on deaf ears.
“I don’t like liars Henry.”
The large black pot in the corner of the room’s contents bubbled, and hissed as some of the luminous liquids splattered into the fire below. He had simply assumed the woman had been making a broth, but had never smelled a thing. She walked over to him and began whispering words so quiet he couldn’t hear, her words dancing in his head. Taking a ladle she poured some of the warm liquid into a jug and handed it to him and he had eagerly drank it down, the warmth of the summer fuelling his thirst; her whispers died down slowly, She had finished her quiet verses and spoke at a normal level, but the words of her poem still spinning in his head (as if a tape recorder was being played.) “I know what you’ve done. And I won’t have it Henry. You will take you medicine, your punishment. The family you stole for will never see you again, and you, you will be banished. You’ll never have communication with another living being again. You’ll be surrounded by lonely waters, trapped in a body that will live forever. A body no one would ever understand, a cage there is no key to. You’ll walk the bed of the lake forever more, tormented, a wandering soul”
Henry had never stolen in his entire life.
Henrys family never saw him again… No one did.


Text and art (C) Myself. No using etc etc
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Comments: 14

Nehrimae [2010-04-30 01:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god now I totally wanna make a character to like, find him, but you pretty much already finished his story...):

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Ithfifi In reply to Nehrimae [2010-04-30 09:34:32 +0000 UTC]

Heh sorry, he's comdemed to a life of lonliness x3

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BlackLupin [2010-04-22 04:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Not sure what you're wanting critique on but I can say this you got the anatomy down very well. The markings, horns and colors give this creature a spiritual feel; something like a forest guardian or god.

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Ithfifi In reply to BlackLupin [2010-04-22 10:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou for your kind words . Anatomy wise, I kinda elongated and slimmed him down because he spends most of his time in the water so I thought he's 'glide' better x3

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BlackLupin In reply to Ithfifi [2010-04-22 10:47:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

I see. Well that would make sense then.

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XxJared-Leto-LovexX [2010-03-26 00:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Oooh Great description! I love the teal markings and the eyes and mouth. They look veeeerry niice!

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Ithfifi In reply to XxJared-Leto-LovexX [2010-03-26 10:02:34 +0000 UTC]

Thankyous dear

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XxJared-Leto-LovexX In reply to Ithfifi [2010-03-28 09:18:13 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SavedGraceZ [2010-03-25 23:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, I like it.... So beautiful....
And the story n_n Creepy. Lol.
VeryprettyandIloveit<3

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Ithfifi In reply to SavedGraceZ [2010-03-26 10:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks <3

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SavedGraceZ In reply to Ithfifi [2010-03-26 15:22:09 +0000 UTC]

Welcome<33

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fishbicth [2010-03-25 23:10:49 +0000 UTC]

eeek i love it i have a deer like oc with a flowly tail that i havent really drawn , you tottaly isnpired me to work on him i love the color scheme and everything

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Ithfifi In reply to fishbicth [2010-03-26 10:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Glad you feel insprired, your characters are always so amazing Thanking yous<3

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Prismaticlysm [2010-03-25 23:09:49 +0000 UTC]

What a curious character you have here. Wonderful job on the coloring and the description. Great concept

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