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Published: 2006-05-15 04:40:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description open hearts –fly

    over a –glass globe

          so delicate- real

rain of angel eyes

          shatters its surface

              as each breath whispers

         (all is not lost)

     pick up the pieces

   to build

                              - your better world.
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Comments: 5

vespera [2006-05-16 00:55:56 +0000 UTC]

".–glass" may I inquire about the period?


I really like the sentiments...

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itsgot2bme In reply to vespera [2006-05-16 01:06:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm not really sure why I put that. Now reading it aloud the . and the - seems repeative as to the pause I intended. Thank you for that, I'll go change it now .

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vespera In reply to itsgot2bme [2006-05-17 06:03:30 +0000 UTC]

^.^ welcome darlin

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smurfmx [2006-05-15 23:50:52 +0000 UTC]

As I told you when you first read it to me its amazing as usual

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itsgot2bme In reply to smurfmx [2006-05-16 01:09:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it sweeheart

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