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Published: 2006-05-15 04:40:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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open hearts –flyover a –glass globe
so delicate- real
rain of angel eyes
shatters its surface
as each breath whispers
(all is not lost)
pick up the pieces
to build
- your better world.
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Comments: 5
vespera [2006-05-16 00:55:56 +0000 UTC]
".–glass" may I inquire about the period?
I really like the sentiments...
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itsgot2bme In reply to vespera [2006-05-16 01:06:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm not really sure why I put that. Now reading it aloud the . and the - seems repeative as to the pause I intended. Thank you for that, I'll go change it now .
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smurfmx [2006-05-15 23:50:52 +0000 UTC]
As I told you when you first read it to me its amazing as usual
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itsgot2bme In reply to smurfmx [2006-05-16 01:09:49 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it sweeheart
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