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Izuma — EFN round 2 part 2
Published: 2009-05-07 05:45:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 6614; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 160
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Paarrrtttt 2!Mr. I (c)
Roz (c) moi
I feel.. kinda bad for Mr. I. Hopefully I can quickly draw in a conclusiony image/comic
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this is such an awsome and sad story! ;U;
I LUV eeeeet! >U<
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Yeah...leaving him passed out in a pretty field and bleeding is probably not a good idea.
As to Roz's question? Probably not.
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Positively
The colors, transitions, everything was great. I admire your talents. :3
Both of your entries were superb. This is going to be a close match...
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wowie, your character has serious issues, man lD id hate to be with a women like that, awesome entry btw
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Awww, poor Roz. Your use of color in this is astounding, and the part at the end where she's crying on top of Mr.I is heartbreaking. I thought you wrote Mr.I very well, twas an impressive entry all around. Nice job!
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dam you Roz...it's bad enough you're strangling the man to death, but to lie on top of Mr I...?
*cries with envy*
Other than that, beautiful plot going on here and her really sad attempt to find some inner peace. The color and tone of the field scene is lovely.
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I Read both and now im putting my thoughts here, holy, Crap, you really know how to bring out the Drama and the Epicness in your parts, great job!
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Some of the views were a little strange (but I think that might be my bad because I'm not quite sure how Mr. Inverted portals work), and I think there was really a whole lot more you could of played with using Mr. Inverted, but overall this page was well done, especially the strangling scene--and I'm going to borrow what my friend described it as, which was that the scene was almost like watching a movie :V
I really like how you switched from dark to light and I have to say my favorite panel is of Roz jumping in after Mr. Inverted into the portal and the lighting gives a wonderful effect to add to the emotion Roz is feeling.
Again I wish you the best of luck on your round~
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Mmmmmm... I'm lovin' this. I'm lovin' this a lot. <333
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This seems very good, you're able to create a great atmosphere, and Roz seems to be a pretty deep character, what with the mood swings. Mr. Inverted is looking great, and you really captured his reluctance well, he really felt uncomfortable about fighting Roz.
...Though this is a bit similar in format to last round, what with starts out freindly, Roz reveals that she be crazy, opponent decides that she needs to be taken out... then boom! strangle time! But then again, the strangling seems like it might actually be relavent to the character, as it seems likely that Roz's sister issues are only the tip of the iceburg...
...Wonder what she'll do against a downright hostile opponent... or someone who doesn't need to breathe?
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I'm kind of wondering that for myself. If I get through, the next set of comics will have a somewhat different format. |D. You get to find out more about Roz's history!
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This. Is. Amazing.
I adore your color work + the paneling is lovely~
Roz's crazed episodes are so interesting to watch. Tohoho
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Is that a boob in the second last panel? or what? 0_o
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That was Rita's dress billowing |D.
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derp *feels dumb*
Thanks, I guess XD
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Holy CRAP ;_____; ;
I feel terrible for saying this but i really never was interested in Roz before All this. Seeing how emotionally unstable she is and getting to read more and more about her story has made me come to realize i REALLY like her. Shes an amazingly well developed character just...wow! God damn I WISH i could convey just as much emotion as you do ;_; ; You're tones are brilliant and the mood and everything is just /wow./
Also you made Mr. I Seriously sexy :,D
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It's ok! Roz wasn't really all that interesting before EFN because I didn't really get a chance to develop her in Infractus. But I improved and was able to put more of her in EFN.
I'm so happy you like her more now! |D.
Mr. I is weird in my style. Seriously
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daww roz's state is sad ;n; trying to find her sister then there's a downhill very sad
but i loved it
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Your drawings are always so emotional. it's....just amazing. :'D
and I just noticed that this is your second opponent without eyes XDD
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.... ;_;
Augh, this is really interesting. You've created a deep character from a relatively simple (you know, in comparison to overtly complex characters... *coughlikeminecough*) idea. It's almost painful, seeing how her lash out and then feel guilt over it.
And that panel where she hugs Mr. I is just so sweet.
(and on another note, his little "please don't be crazy :c" line made me laugh out loud.)
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Awwww~ I was really hoping I could make her a bit more complex than my other characters and it seems like I succeeded! If I get through, you'll know a lot more~
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Roz got strong hands there eh? XD
Btw, the art here is soo good!! I love the change of tones and colour schemes to the environments, shows such advanced skills, best of luck!!
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When Roz is crying on Inverted, maybe my favourite scene, it's so cute ;w;
Btw, Inverted leg bandages dissappear from a panel to the following one
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hehe..I'm gonna poke her with a cane...see what happens..hee...
Strangulation. Thats what.
Great entry! Im so happy I get to see this so soon!! i love the colors and the way you work them, simply amazing!
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Jeez... oo The colour transition, and how you kept the mood....... gorgeous... <3
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How GRIPPING! 8O Your style is so awesome! love how you made Mr. I! >w< Had my stomach in knots . . . is it weird if I think Roz and Mr. I are cute together? ._.
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That just further proves how much of a pairing whore Roz is. XDD. It's ok if you think they look cute together but it's going to be a painful relationship if Mr. I tags along or something.
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. . .damn girl
why ya gota strangel everyone
Loved this to bits!!!!
God your amazing I cant wait to see how everything plays out. I feel sad for poor roz.
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OH ROZ. YOU AND YOUR NON LETHAL STRANGLIN'!
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