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Description "Please...Neddy..please.." Izzy cried out, fully aware that Neddy's ears were deaf to the cry of mercy.
"Yes....?" he laughed, smiling at her. He had a slightly crazed look, the look of the damned and deprived.
"Just let me go....I can't do anything...you...you left me," Izzy sobbed.
Neddy hadn't slept in days. But did that matter? Why, he was on the verge of insanity. During the chaotic battle, Izzy was knocked out, unconcious--it was then that he made his move. Stealthily ferrying her across perilous ground, he managed to hide her in his secret cave.
It was his fault, yes, but what did that matter? She drove him wild. This was the best way, perhaps. Keep her caged, so she could no longer do any damage to his heart. Neddy laughed, why, in fact, he had not such a clear mind in days. What did it matter if his heart became muted in the process?
"Let me go Neddy...what else can I do? KD--"
"Don't say that name!" Neddy spat, hissing at her. He looked beyond sane reason, beyond any of her pleas.
She glowered at him, fed up with being patient.
"You're insane! I hate you--"
Slap!
"Oh Izzy..." Neddy sighed calmly. He gazed at her, confidence brimming in his shining, glimmering eyes.
"Hush now, everything will be okay," he continued in a sing-song tone, tilting her head as he spoke.
The harsh stinging was cooled by her tears, but she only could gasp as Neddy's wild green met her timid brown. What was she thinking? Did she love him any more? He was doing her a favor, of course. How could she not see how much pain he had sacraficed just for her to be here, in his grasp? Did she hate him as much as he hated her? The selfish Peridain, so called Ice Caster to save all of humanity. Any story's heros always seem to have a weakness in their hearts. It was all too easy.
He swiped his hand quickly against her gentle dark brown hair, remembering it's texture from distant, hazy memories through his clouded insanity.
"Neddy," she gasped, the bonds tight and unforgiving upon her.
She looked away from him, unable to return the look he was giving her.
But of course, he needed nothing else.
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I wonder if anyone can see any resemblence to part one..and I'm not talking about the artwork. This is sort of a vent, but unrelated to what I'm upset about. NeddyxIzzy is one of the most intresting relationships I've ever come across, which is why they are so intriguing. I love writing their scenes together.
But enough of what I think.

Please, let me know what you think!

Part One..

Izzy and Neddy was drawn by Izzyhime
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Comments: 51

Izzyhime In reply to ??? [2013-02-23 18:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RottenNails In reply to Izzyhime [2013-02-23 18:37:09 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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AshesAndEmbers [2012-10-16 15:21:04 +0000 UTC]

One of my favorite pieces. Already put it in my favorites. Really good story concept! Love it!

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Izzyhime In reply to AshesAndEmbers [2012-10-16 19:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow thank you so much!! I did work on the excerpt parts x3

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AshesAndEmbers In reply to Izzyhime [2012-10-16 21:00:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! high fi- er, four. :/ (gah! paws!)

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Izzyhime In reply to AshesAndEmbers [2012-10-16 22:17:07 +0000 UTC]

xD I know right? *high paws anyway*

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Riaburr [2011-06-17 01:45:22 +0000 UTC]

*beats Neddy* LET HER GO BITCH D8<

amazing btw <33

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Izzyhime In reply to Riaburr [2011-06-21 06:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Shaffie
I know he's so mean to meeeee

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KillaraFox [2011-06-13 15:17:03 +0000 UTC]

...Wow this is an awesome story. Got a book? I'd buy it.

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Izzyhime In reply to KillaraFox [2011-06-17 15:09:36 +0000 UTC]

:,3 Thank you, I have a folder for Irresistible Destiny, a novel-to-be. You've made my day x3

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Chris-Paw [2011-06-06 06:07:48 +0000 UTC]

The darkness has shrouded his mind and blanketed his heart, deceiving his eyes and blinding him from the true reality that is in front of him. I feel bad for Izzy because of what she is going through. The written part is very well written and is really intense and the picture really helps to show the emotions in the words.

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Izzyhime In reply to Chris-Paw [2011-06-06 07:11:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad it does mean something to some people. Wonderful diction my friend, but I do feel bad for Neddy. He isn't all bad as he seems to be..

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Chris-Paw In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-06 13:01:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, he isn't bad, part one showed it but something happened and has just made him lose his sanity and whatnot, what has caused this I am not sure

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Izzyhime In reply to Chris-Paw [2011-06-06 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, he basically became a Dark Caster =/

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Chris-Paw In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-07 03:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok that makes sense

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Ragg-the-buizel [2011-06-05 21:08:22 +0000 UTC]

Ive always loved your ID pictures and stories. The little snipets you give here and there are very amazing. I think its going to turn out to be one of the best novels ever made.
The artwork looks just wow, very impressive. The details in the eyes and the tears really make this one stand out.
Love the story too, even just this little bit makes me want to read more but sadly there isnt anymore xD
Great job altogether Izzy

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Izzyhime In reply to Ragg-the-buizel [2011-06-06 07:10:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, there's a folder of all my ID stuff

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Ragg-the-buizel In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-06 09:20:18 +0000 UTC]

Yay ^^
very excited stuff in there (yes, i know ive seen it all before but its still awesome stuff)

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Izzyhime In reply to Ragg-the-buizel [2011-06-06 07:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks x3

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Ragg-the-buizel In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-06 09:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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knukels-fanboy [2011-06-05 19:35:20 +0000 UTC]

insaine neddy is insaine O3O

the storie is realy good and so is the picture ^^

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Izzyhime In reply to knukels-fanboy [2011-06-06 07:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I hope his design hasn't changed too much, I always mess up with his ears.
Meh, he goes crazy xD

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knukels-fanboy In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-09 22:37:40 +0000 UTC]

it hasnt 83

how do you know you dont know him >.<

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Izzyhime In reply to knukels-fanboy [2011-06-10 13:42:49 +0000 UTC]

xD I made him silly! Course I know him

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Xiprix [2011-06-05 05:16:17 +0000 UTC]

How very interisting; I've always possesed an inescapable prediection for descents into madness.

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Izzyhime In reply to Xiprix [2011-06-06 07:09:05 +0000 UTC]

A very admireable quality, my friend =3

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Quavera-Tava [2011-06-04 22:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Rape...

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Izzyhime In reply to Quavera-Tava [2011-06-05 03:11:22 +0000 UTC]

No, sorry

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DanieluYoshikoto In reply to Quavera-Tava [2011-06-05 00:04:22 +0000 UTC]

more like mental torture, with no escape.

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Treacly [2011-06-04 05:59:54 +0000 UTC]

HAVE MERCEH! I-I'm Speechless, I am in love with your story already!
And I've only read this far. Whoever doesn't appreciate the emotion you put into this is lame. >:C
I'm racked with despair for Izz, but sympathetic for Ned, is he truly insane?
Or is he just so infatuated with Izz that he can no long view life in a realistic perspective.
I want moooore story.... D:

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Izzyhime In reply to Treacly [2011-06-04 06:09:31 +0000 UTC]

[link] x3 Part one, girlfriend.

It's got more symbolism between them both than just seperate. There is also my ID prologue out, as well as seperate stories =3
I'm going to make folders for my stories an such, but they're in my gallery.
Thank you so much Eve, your too kind TT^TT
He's not yet, it's the darkness inside of him that makes him insane, not as much as the person he used to be.

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Treacly In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-04 06:12:29 +0000 UTC]

OH LORDEH~ >D< I'm gonna be up all night now. *____*

Awe, I understand now.
I'm hoping Izz can find a way to remove the darkness inside of him. D':
Your so welcome Izz! <3

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Izzyhime In reply to Treacly [2011-06-04 06:31:40 +0000 UTC]

I created a folder, it should have all the story-based stuff with ID. =3
Thank you, everything will hopefully turn out alright!

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Treacly In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-04 06:32:42 +0000 UTC]

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Izzyhime In reply to Treacly [2011-06-04 15:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Hope you didn't stay up too late x3

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KikiwasHEREagain [2011-06-04 05:49:53 +0000 UTC]

OH no!!! idk what was really going on (lost my glasses so i prob skiped a couple lines ^^) but neddy's in sane... i got that part..is he gonna kill her?? :I I HOPE NOT!! anyway your agreat writer and artsit ^^ keep up the goo work ^^

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Izzyhime In reply to KikiwasHEREagain [2011-06-04 06:33:54 +0000 UTC]

He's not going to kill her, don't worry =3
Thank you so much :3
I hope your glasses are found! xD

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KikiwasHEREagain In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-04 06:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Ok thats good ^^ no prob ^^ yes i will .... actally when i was done reading the story i went into the kitchen to get soda and i found them on my microwave SO YA!! and thnx ^U^

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Izzyhime In reply to KikiwasHEREagain [2011-06-04 15:39:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesome xD I love it when you find stuff easy

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KikiwasHEREagain In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-04 18:04:13 +0000 UTC]

^^ yep same ^^ (my friends being an ass hole on stuff like usernames and stuff)

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Izzyhime In reply to KikiwasHEREagain [2011-06-06 07:44:10 +0000 UTC]

That sucks

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KikiwasHEREagain In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-06 11:02:11 +0000 UTC]

ya ^^

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Kelux0 [2011-06-04 05:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh please thats not anywhere near real insanity and emotional damage.
But I can't really step in in your stories with out permission.
How I wish I could to anyone,
I would be a world wide MENACE!!

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Izzyhime In reply to Kelux0 [2011-06-04 05:51:46 +0000 UTC]

He's not actually insane. It's the spiraling fall he's going into. This wasn't in first person either so it's not truly a look in his thoughts. So, sorry if it's not good enough for you.

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Kelux0 In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-04 05:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Thats not what I meant,
If hes falling into it I'd say hes still got like 3 more weeks to be saved fore' it leaves a mark,
Unless it just start like within a week then 1 or 2 more,
And even then he'll never be any near comparable to me.

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Izzyhime In reply to Kelux0 [2011-06-04 05:58:36 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Kelux0 In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-04 06:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Izzyhime In reply to Kelux0 [2011-06-04 06:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for lettin me know, but this really isn't about the story or my artwork, so I'm going to hide it due to irrelevant quality.

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Kelux0 In reply to Izzyhime [2011-06-04 06:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Okay, and I forgot to mention that I think you art looks really nice,
So I'm gonna have to look at more of your stuff.

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Izzyhime In reply to Kelux0 [2011-06-04 06:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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