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Published: 2019-04-13 01:24:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1384; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 0
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Description i tried on some more frame-by-frame animation, so i can get the hang of it, and i made this art-piece of Insomnia, a song by Daya, and i felt like it explained me so much, due to me having insomnia, I AM NOT LOOKING FOR ATTENTION, i just did this for fun, but insomnia is not something to joke about or make fun ofHope you all like it!
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Comments: 5

Charlemagne-DA [2019-04-13 15:42:49 +0000 UTC]

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First of all, the way you drew this is AMAZING. I love the fade of colors in her hair, and her shirt being off one shoulder adds that disheveled look that I think you were gong for. I also like the little detail that the corner or her eyes are still slightly visible under her hair.
The one thing I think is a bit lacking in this drawing is the coloring. I see that you were trying to go for a dark tone in it, but when you dull all the colors like that, it makes the image a bit flat and unimpactful. Don't get rid of the dull colors altogether, but add a few highlights in her eyes or hair and deepen the shadows more.
I also think that it would have looked better with a darker background, but that's perhaps just my preferance <3

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rabidmomento In reply to Charlemagne-DA [2019-04-14 00:58:26 +0000 UTC]

this is a very good critique qwq

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Charlemagne-DA In reply to rabidmomento [2019-04-14 01:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I try to be as helpful as possible >w<

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VincentLumpas [2019-05-23 09:37:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm having an insomia too...

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Omegerr [2019-04-13 02:02:12 +0000 UTC]

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