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J8d — Ri.Be.Ka pp. 1-2
Published: 2005-10-27 07:45:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 3606; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 1091
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Finally, I started to do comics on my series "Amazing Kids Ri•Be•Ka". Now you don't need to think "who the hell was Ri•Be•Ka?" ^ ^Since this is a beginning, it may be a little boring and just plain but be patient. I'll just keep doing this to finish the story. And sorry for my English. ^////^
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As for the beginning:
This is a big phenomenon when the big "light" has reach the Earth and scattered everywhere to search the right kid to handle their "powers"... And Rio, as an age of 5, was one of them...
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Brilliant Start, a few gramical errors, but we aren't perfect, now are we? (Series is going to faves, including char profiles ^_^)
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yessss!!! It finally starts. Making this a favorite for sure.
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the powerpuff girl style is really cute. keep it up
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Alright! You started the story of [link] ! I'll keep an eye on this story!
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What the? Sorry, when I wrote "Ri-Be-Ka" with periods in between, it turned into a link!
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Interesting beginning. Your English is gramatically incorrect in some places though. But, that can be fixed. =^^= Can't wait to see more.
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The english is really rough x.x I can understand most of it, but alot of it doesn't make sense.
If you can just fix the text, then it'll be perfect ^^
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i wanna help! i wanna help! i wanna help! you on the comic
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Cute! Nice effect with the "light".
If you're worried about your English, you could ask a buddy to proofread for you and help you edit your text. ^_~ It's a good idea even if you master the language. I'm an English major, and I sill find it useful to have someone proofread my work.
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Cool... well done, I hope to see more of your comic n_n
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... i see. nice job on the comic. yeah your right your grammer is a bit off but i got the gist of it.
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Outstanding artwork! Look forward to more!
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Cool, this looks to be very interesting!
And if you're interested, I could help you out with the English editing/proofreading.
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Somewhat simmilar to the opening of Loonatics Unleashed
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