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Published: 2018-08-29 08:08:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1684; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 0
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Introducing JACAC
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Born in Coimbra, Portugal, ages ago. An architect by trade, I have always worked in photography since I was a boy when people said that my photos were different and I captured the feeling of people. I worked as a professional photographer for a cars magazine and worked the formula 1 championship, rally, moto gp and several other sports, for six years when I was at university learning architecture. After that
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This criticism is in English which is not my natural language.
Technically the picture is well done. The reflections on the leather are perfect as well as the color and texture of the skin of the model. By cons there is a lack of texture on the boot.
The model is pretty. It could have been framed in the middle. It is a little off center on the right.
Laying the model - slightly forward - does not showcase it. She looks too "static".
The hair hanging on each side frames and encloses the model's face. One of the wicks could have been released on the shoulder to disappear in the back.
Finally, the white background. I understand it was to make a contrast but this one covers too much of the photograph.
A neutral background with different shades would have been preferable.
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Hello
You can make it in English or French no problem.
I rate it fare so people can read it, but for sure i don't agree with you in a few matters.
"In the middle"
I think it would be worst, never frame on the middle, use always the 1/3 rule.
"look so static"
It's the intention as she doesn't care about me or the photo.
"The hair"
We want that the blonde air make contrast with the black and the face is lightly hidden
"The white background"
It was what we intend to do, she is lost in the white, for me it would be better to have even more white, in a landscape format and she on the right of the frame
As you can see, different approaches, different ideas, but anyway thank you for your time and suggestions
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i don`t know... i still thinking that your abstract vision much better or maybe i don`t like composition... something must be behind that girl or less static composition. and remember i`m very like your photos, it`s just my opinion 
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t h a n k . y o u . f o r . y o u r . w o r d s . w e . m u s t . t r y . o t h er . t h i n g s . t o . l e a r n . a n d . i m p r o v e .
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Pretty lady and very long legs!
Thank you for the "present" my friend!!
Sorry not to have commented earlier but I have been "away" for some weeks looking after my mother..
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g l a d . y o u . l i k e . t h e . p r e s e n t .
n o . w o r r i e s . i . k n o w . t h a t
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... a n d . e v e r y t h i n g . w e n t . w e l l ?
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Yes, thank you... but I will need to return regularly now...
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i t ' s . l i f e ... b u t . t h a t . c a n . b e . g r e a t ...
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We make the best of each situation - with what we have in our hands and hearts at that time
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Wow…. she is a really nice woman….
Good one as usual dear José….
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y e s . s h e . i s .
t h a n k . y o u . Teresa
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Amazing woman. Great pose. Exciting bodyfeatures. Special composition, she´s like out of a blaze of light
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t h a n k . y o u . f o r . y o u r . w o r d s .
n o t . l i k e . t h e . critique . i . g o t ...
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A nasty kid´s critique, just don´t care
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I do not like to criticize, but as a former photographer and digital artist, struggling with similar issues, I just want to suggest something.
Maybe she leans forward, grabs the jacket and then opens the jacket with a Tada and leans back, in this case, fits the pose.
Otherwise, she would have to keep the upper body candle degrees (i hope you understand) and the camera from the left side of the bottom up to the model. for a Picture without shadows the light is fully okay and fits in the background. Possibly. a mirror, yes well, they are expensive in that size ^ ^.
but on the whole I like it. Yes, also the model, best regards to her.
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t h a n k . y o u . f o r . y o u r . w o r d s .
i . m a d e . a . l o t . o f . p h o t o s . a s . y o u . c a n . i m a g i n e (not with a mirror) a n d . i . l i k e . t h i s . o n e . b u t . i . u n d e s t a n d . y o u r . p o i n t . o f . v i e w .
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If you did not like it, you would not show it
Nice, I'm curious what we still see beautiful in the future ^ ^.
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i . s a i d . t h a t . i . l i k e . i t . b u t . u n d e r s t a n d . y o u r . p o i n t . o f . v i e w !
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I already understood that ^^. All good!
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