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djailledie [2009-12-03 05:11:09 +0000 UTC]

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I am not a big fan of beggar images. Not only it is a very common subject for street photography, but more annoying is the fact that you will always find tons of people to claim to be moved by a such image, while they will go their way and overlook the beggar while in the street. Another typical weakness of beggar's images is that there is not interaction what's so ever with the place or the people around. In that regard, this image is much better: Not only there is this symmetry - the dog on one side, the man on the other - framing the door, that tells me that this guy wants to catch everybody who is going to use this door - the dog will force the walker by to use the right door, where is will be caught by the man - but you also show the interaction with the crowd - in his gaze and by having cleverly including people in the reflection.
Technically speaking, the black and white conversion is good, the natural lines are well used in framing.
I could dream of not having the bike, as it is more a distraction than anything else, and you could also crop the leg on the bottom left, but this is street after all. you have to cope with reality.

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makepictures In reply to djailledie [2009-12-03 21:19:28 +0000 UTC]

You can't crop the foreground leg on the far left of the image because it draws you into the legs across the reflection and then to the central figure in the work because exactly he is at leg-level.

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djailledie In reply to makepictures [2009-12-04 05:37:55 +0000 UTC]

You might be right!

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SLPdomain In reply to djailledie [2009-12-03 18:22:34 +0000 UTC]

A friend of mine once said.' I dont like street photography.'
Why? I asked.
'I dont like seeing homeless folks in distress.'
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yes --a street cliche--one i think has taken over street photography--as my efforts to deviate from such prove unsuccessful.
O --this is not about me...
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i am drawn to this because of the dog and reflection and dont necessarily feel like this guy is in some overly sadden place.
he is more then likely aiming to get his money for his next fix.

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djailledie In reply to SLPdomain [2009-12-04 05:20:39 +0000 UTC]

I agree, while there are many other interesting things in the streets!

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Jack070 In reply to djailledie [2009-12-03 15:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your time.

Just one note here: I'm pretty much sure that the man was not a bggar, he just sat there. May sound strange, but that's how it looked

Thanks once again!

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djailledie In reply to Jack070 [2009-12-04 05:05:13 +0000 UTC]

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featKae [2013-07-15 13:50:35 +0000 UTC]

I think it would be a lot better if the dog has a lighter color. When I first looked at the photo I didn't see the dog. It would be so much better if the dog seen much clearer

That's my opinion btw. And still a great photo.

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Jack070 In reply to featKae [2013-07-15 14:04:40 +0000 UTC]

I see your point. The easiest solution for this would be either talking to the dog so that it'd change its clothes or to spray it with paint. Both solutions seem a bit risky

Jokes aside, thanks for the comment!

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featKae In reply to Jack070 [2013-07-15 18:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha no problem .

But it's not your fault. It's the dogs . Some things are just luck I know that and that's all I can say.

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getcarter [2011-05-29 10:27:38 +0000 UTC]

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Jack070 In reply to getcarter [2011-05-30 08:30:22 +0000 UTC]

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r4don [2010-03-15 22:06:56 +0000 UTC]

my favourite of your whole gallery.

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Jack070 In reply to r4don [2010-03-15 22:12:50 +0000 UTC]

*cough* Thanks to my mum who told me to make few steps back to take it

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StephanePellennec [2009-12-03 18:53:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad there's the bike here.
It gives me an important info about the guy. That is his bike, there's his sleeping bag and an other bag on it. So I can imagine this man as a traveler, not as a beggar.

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Jack070 In reply to StephanePellennec [2009-12-03 21:32:27 +0000 UTC]

That's what I think as well, thanks for the comment!

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StephanePellennec In reply to Jack070 [2009-12-03 21:43:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Nocturnatum [2009-12-03 13:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Definitely a good Black and White. I like this because This man and dog seem to be slowed down from the world as others seen through the reflection on the glass seem to be engaging in something.
Good how even though there is quite a lot going on in the picture, the subject is still strong.
If this was in colour I don't think it would have as much impact. Overall, nice exposure and very interesting.

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Jack070 In reply to Nocturnatum [2009-12-03 15:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comment, sir!

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Nocturnatum In reply to Jack070 [2009-12-03 20:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Obliged

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SUDOR [2009-12-03 10:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Well...

STREET... [link]

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Jack070 In reply to SUDOR [2009-12-03 15:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Ehm, sorry?

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SUDOR In reply to Jack070 [2009-12-03 16:25:19 +0000 UTC]

?
I'm always happy when the photographers make street photos !

Sorry, yes... for my English !
Good photos !

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Jack070 In reply to SUDOR [2009-12-03 21:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Ok, okay, thanks

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BlackInfinity666 [2009-11-19 21:12:48 +0000 UTC]

nice job I love the concept and focus if this pic. Also I love BW photo's.

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Jack070 In reply to BlackInfinity666 [2009-11-19 22:22:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Demonic-Rabbit [2009-11-09 16:10:26 +0000 UTC]

The symmetry in this shot is amazing, especially the similarity in the expressions between the man and the dog. Perfect timing

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Jack070 In reply to Demonic-Rabbit [2009-11-09 16:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it!

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Doneski [2009-11-09 12:44:13 +0000 UTC]

wow , amazing pic Jack.
Great timing! Cheers ^^

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Jack070 In reply to Doneski [2009-11-09 15:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it!

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tigeriic [2009-11-08 15:46:14 +0000 UTC]

the similaritys between man ad dog in this pic are real sensation

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Jack070 In reply to tigeriic [2009-11-08 16:09:00 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah...

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Zoeburnsorange [2009-10-31 19:56:18 +0000 UTC]

good picture

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JoGuge [2009-10-21 20:28:14 +0000 UTC]

oh! this is great!
so much going on! i love everything about it

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ongsang [2009-10-03 16:33:06 +0000 UTC]

awww pic..

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Jack070 In reply to ongsang [2009-10-03 16:50:15 +0000 UTC]

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mim304 [2009-10-01 21:32:41 +0000 UTC]

Great work! I like this a lot!

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Jack070 In reply to mim304 [2009-10-02 13:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Glad you do!

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The-Yard-Collective [2009-09-30 13:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Featured [link]

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Jack070 In reply to The-Yard-Collective [2009-09-30 13:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thank you

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The-Yard-Collective In reply to Jack070 [2009-09-30 14:23:07 +0000 UTC]

our pleasure

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ReehBR [2009-09-19 18:51:21 +0000 UTC]

haha, beautiful piece! ^^

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Eliza-mac [2009-09-08 00:20:24 +0000 UTC]

Good capture

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Jack070 In reply to Eliza-mac [2009-09-08 15:23:54 +0000 UTC]

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du-la [2009-09-06 20:04:03 +0000 UTC]

I was wrong. It seemed to me that the words on the door were in portuguese but I see now that they may be in spanish. Am I right?

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Jack070 In reply to du-la [2009-09-06 20:39:44 +0000 UTC]

It's in Polish, actually

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du-la In reply to Jack070 [2009-09-06 21:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Two words that are similar to the portuguese and spanish languages. Do they also mean "perfumery"?

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Jack070 In reply to du-la [2009-09-06 21:07:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes, they does

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du-la In reply to Jack070 [2009-09-06 21:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Interesting! Thanks

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du-la [2009-09-06 18:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Portugal??

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