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Published: 2016-11-10 22:09:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 496; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Hi, I'm here to critique this piece (hope you don't mind)!
Based on the some of the comments here, I'm a bit scared to look up the show...but looking at the picture alone, I can say that your drawing skills are amazing ! Your lines are among the cleanest I've seen, and I'm really impressed by the amount of detail you've put into the smallest sections of the drawing, like the static on the TV screen and the wanted poster. Amazing work!
For suggestions: be careful of leaving pencil marks on your piece! There are traces of pencil and eraser marks in some areas of the drawing, such as the center of the ruler (?), the rightmost character, and the bathtub; if you can't get rid of them without tearing up the paper, one way to remove them is to use an image editing software to remove the marks. You can also use the same technique to smooth out some of the lines, like the limbs of the character on the right 
Hope this helps, and have a happy new year 
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I don't mind at all, friend! In fact, it's appreciated.
Firstly let me say thank you so much for the positivity! I am a control freak and perfectionist when it comes to my work, so detail means a lot to me. And I do not blame you for not looking up the source material. Most people find it pretty creepy but I found it tame.
I'm surprised that you find my lines clean, because I always believed that they were not exact or as clean as I would like them to be.
I'm aware of the pencil and eraser marks. It drives me crazy but I naturally leave heavy marks, leaving serious what I call 'eraser scars'. If I tried harder on my paper to get rid of them, yes, it would eat up my page and destroy my piece. I do have computer software but when I try to fix the issues, because the graphite is smudged, glaring white patches emerge and that's almost worse. I'm an amatuer, and I have a lot to learn yet and much to practice until perfect.
Thank you for such a lovely and respectful critique. I've never had one before! And can I ask where you found me, and why you decided to critique me? Just curious.
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Sorry for the super-late reply, and I'm glad that you appreciate my critique!
You are very welcome; same here, detail means a lot to me too so I try to pay attention to the details when critiquing 
I've looked up a lot of creepy things and regretted it, so am hesitant to take the risk xD.
Your lines are very nice - they really show that you have superb control over the pen
I see, that's tough to correct. Many of us can benefit from more practice; keep practicing and you will get there!
I'm surprised you haven't received a critique before, especially since I found you through Project Comment o.O!
I was participating in a critiquing contest and was looking for artists to critique, I think I found you through one of the group's projects 
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Thank you so much!
Yeah, that moon is none too happy XD
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U welcome!
Poor moon!
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nice ^^
oh and how this show traumatized me in so many ways xD
but it was awesome
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Thanks so much! And if you're interesting in more trauma, there's more fan art of DHMIS where that came from!
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