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Awwww. he's a lil cutie. i love the pose and the position of the pic. totally awesome.
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This photo is wonderful! Your model is very talented
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A very nice shot, wonderfully croped and framed The grey scale is woring very nicly as well. 
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Cute photo, good lighting and crop... He does, however, look a little bit uncomfortable, which detracts from the image a bit, I think.
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I like the pose a lot- was this posed, or was it more spontanious? He has a very cool look in his eyes.
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haha thanks. from what i remember it was a mixture of both lol. He was sitting like that watching a movie or something...and i was like hold on! lol
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I really like this, it's really cute =]
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This one caught my eye right away. It's so, clean.
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This represents innocence so well - right down to the writing! Though, it seems like he was cut out of a picture; that's given away by how unnaturally crisp the edge of his shirt is. I still like it.
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haha thanks so much 
Jake
Thanks a ton for the
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Such a cutie! Nice clean image. But he doesn't look innocent at all
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The sweet image of innocence. Very beautiful kid, and the lighting is awesome!
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I like the fact you used a boy. Too many people use girls to represent innocence.
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i absolutely LOVE this... i love black and white, and the shades are PERFECT
+++ he's absolutely adorable
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Jake
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This is wonderful! You were right not to center it, the composition is great. He's really cute too ^^ His shoulder looks a bit odd, perhaps needing a bit more contrast or something.
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Awesome
Jake
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This is a really great shot! I like that you only have half of him in there. It's a really nice photo to have in B&W too, the tones are very distinct. You have a real talent to be able to shoot a young child, especially with a pose like that.
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Jake
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hmm... i like the off center, a lot, but i wish you hadnt cut his face off right like that, straight down the center. well....maybe there was no better place to crop it, i can see how thta would be the dillemma.
the only other problem i can see is that i can tell where you photomanipped it- the edge his shirt is too starkly defined and i can see the tell-tale marks of the clone tool. otherwise, i like the medium contrast greys. the font is even nice, even though im not much a fan of fonts in artwork...
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Wow thank you for such detailed comments they are really nice to read, and extremely helpful
Jake
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aim to please! no help in commenting if its not helpful.
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What a cute little kid. Great lighting, and expression. Was it posed, or spontaneous?
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Jake
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of course i like it. his expression is so beautiful.
i never know how to shoot children, and it seems you done it very well!
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D Thank you so much, you have such encouraging comments! thanks
Jake
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Oh, and this goes along with the song I am listening to now. I'm also gonna +fav it
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I like the composition here. I think you should gray down the text and make it more subtle like kidscruff said, and maybe add a little something to the left side of the image to balance it all out
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wow great ideas! Thank you soooo much 
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Nice pose, I like the expression on his face. He looks a bit shy, that is always cute and often the innocent ones are a bit shy. The font fits the content of the text, because it's so soft and childish. I do feel, however, that it is a bit misplaced. I don't know where you should rather put it, but it get's a bit too much attention with all that white space above it. Perhapsif you made the font colour gray? I'm not sure.
The cutting is also a bit brutal, his arm seems a bit too "perfect" in it's shape. Too straight line. Else, very nice
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wow, thank you so much for that great critiquing, looking at the picture i definetly agree with everything you have said thanks again!!
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nice portrait and good use of crop/framal reference. i would scrap the text though, it is distracting and doesnt help the image any....a more subtle approach to text placement might do it more favours.
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no worries bud, you got some good stuff!
and a great signature too!
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Nice, the look on his face is screaming "I didin't do it"
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That's a brilliant portrait! Love the crop. Nice work.
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