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Published: 2007-03-14 16:08:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 15645; Favourites: 263; Downloads: 332
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Commission forOne of his OC's: Alice
Tried some new techniques with this one... i
the see-thru bit! Many layers on this'un. 
Alice is © *Kuragiman
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Comments: 49
Wow you are amazing. I just finished a drawing that i would like to ink and scan. But one of the main things i want to put in it is a see-thru jacket.. Would you share your secrets with me, please! Oh and how did you get your outlines around her to look so nice, Did you ink it before you scanned it or do you have like a tablet Thanks.
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Ah my bad, i didnt read all the messages. I see so it was a lot of layers and opacity.. alright ill give it a shot thanks.
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For the see thru shirt, did you just change the opacity of the layer?
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yep... soft light layer properties too.
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Well drawn, but I think her left arm is a bit too short. I think. o____O
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"Getting Ready"... For what depends on if they're going up or down.
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nice,i like the see threw shirt,nice techniqe.
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AWESOME!!!
This is really really pretty... although my mum gave me a kinda weird look when I was looking at it... but who cares... shes very awesome hun!
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wow, cool , so sexy man, i like it, especially the transparent cloth tat u showed out, cool.
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O_O
whats this funny feeling that i have??
lol, very nice and sexy
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looks really nice and the coloring is awesome
gonna spoil the fun though... since you ask for advanced crit, I have to say that the left arm is too short. Also I think the lower part of the right arm kinda looks weird, as if she had no muscle or anything and kinda seems to be bent.
(god I hate doing advanced crits!!
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Gotta know how you do the see through. I always wondered how that was pulled off correctly.
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layers my good man... it's all in the layers. and the opacity, i suppose...
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But you always make it seem so simple. T_T
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sorry bout that
but yeah, it's all in the layers. dont be afraid to use 5-8 layers for saaaay skin tones (play with layer effects to get some neat visuals i.e. screen, hard light, etc). use the airbrush and eraser at different opacities to get the soft look and dont forget to add highlight color from the background!
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Hmm. No one else has brought this up yet so perhaps it's just me, but I do believe the arm closest to us is a little off. Unfortunately, I'm horrible at foreshortening and cannot even begin to suggest what might be "wrong." I'd be taking guesses, so this crit isn't too helpful. D:
Everything else looks great to me, though I would suggest putting a 'mature content' warning up. Even if it's not that bad, some dA peoples can get anal about suggestive drawings in anime style...
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the hands/arms were tough to get right... i think if i shaded it a bit more, it'd look ok.
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Ooh. I didn't think about that (the shading, that is.) and hands are evil. ...to draw.
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Good times, good times indeed. I love Alice. She's one of my favorite characters to have drawn by all you artists out there and you have done an excellent job on her. Vampire school girls rule. 
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Thanx!
I had a lot of fun with this pic. (I FREAKIN love the see-thru-ness!!) I'm so glad it meets your expectations. If you ever need more stuff, you know where i am!
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HaHa.. I click the link.. haha
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Her legs look really strange in accordance to how her body is turned.
*shrug*
Still five bajillion times better than any of my crap, so I should keep quiet.
I like her face.
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i thought so too... but it's just the angle
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She's going the right way...keep going *drools*
Maybe the curtains need some work. I see something wrong that I can't describe now.
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its the lineart... i'm thinking of fading it out more.
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I like the details in it. I think underneath the pillows, you could put some shadows. But, don't worry about what I say too much. I cant do anything like your picture and get it to look even half as good.
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Ha ha. I still think it's great.
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fixed!!
thanx for the crit! i wouldnt've noticed.
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I forgot to add it to my favorites earlier.
Wow, usually my comments are ignored because I know nothing about this. Yay! ^-^
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Very nice. I would give you advanced critique, but what is there to say? Perfectly titillating
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