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jadeoracle — Autumn Wind
Published: 2006-03-17 23:35:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 55; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description I awoke as if I were in a trance,
To a haunting melody.
Silhouettes played tricks in the moonlight,
And rested beneath the trees.
Lost leaves danced upon the ground
As I crept out into the world.
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Telestic [2006-03-21 06:13:28 +0000 UTC]

hey man i know! that site is such a rip! i was just looking for some feedback and then they were all saying that i was good enough to get published and the editors had meticulously looked over thousands of entries and somehow picked mine. it's a load of bull! deviantart is all i need for feedback now haha. i just saw that u had posted a bunch of poems. i will look over them when i have some more time! : ]

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jadeoracle In reply to Telestic [2006-03-22 01:38:15 +0000 UTC]

I know. Sometimes late at night I use to 'write' poems. And I would forget to spell check etc. They were shit and got 'published'

Yeah I have posted almost all of my old poems. Most of them are short and aren't that good. I realized that I have been depressed on and off for years though. That was an intresting insight.

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