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jadeoracle — Fear your mortality
Published: 2005-04-09 02:06:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description [Curtin rises. Stage opens in darkness. A light slowly brightens until the CENTER of the stage is well lit. The RIGHT side of the stage is also lit but the LEFT side is still quite dark. It is a cold day at an old mountain cemetery. Halfway in the shadows to the LEFT is a large dead tree.  The rest of the stage has scattered old tombstones, some broken and falling down.  Fog covers the stage floor.]   

[The sound of two people walking come from the RIGHT.]

[Two people enter from the RIGHT. One is holding a camera.]

FRIEND.  We’re here. Pretty lively isn’t it?
PHOTOGRAPHER. It’s perfect. So solemn and mysterious. I have been dying to take photos of a graveyard for ages.
FRIEND. Why again did we have to drive all the way up to the mountains to find a cemetery?
PHOTOGRAPHER. Well the Mountain View Cemetery gives me the creeps.
FRIEND. [Laughs.]
PHOTOGRAPHER. [Moves and looks around.] It’s just weird. A gas station across the street, housing developments on the other.  It’s right in the middle of everything and you can’t avoid driving by it. [Pause. Starts taking photos of the tombstones and moves about the stage.] Plus I wouldn’t feel right taking photos there. You know? Because people’s loved ones are buried there…and they still are remembered and mourned.
FRIEND. Yeah, I guess I see what you mean. [Pause.]  Amber’s little sister is buried there.
PHOTOGRAPHER.  Or like those two girls and that guy from high school that died in that car crash on Ninth Street last year.

[PHOTOGRAPHER kneels down to read the epithet tombstone.]

PHOTOGRAPHER. “Our Beloved Emma, Darlin we miss thee.  Age 11 months.” [Moves on to another tombstone and reads.] “Here lies our beloved Sgt. Samuel Taylor. Husband Father Friend. Forever in our hearts.” [Pause.]  The people buried in this cemetery lived in times so much different from ours. I think that is why it doesn’t bother me to be in old cemeteries. [Stands up.] In new cemeteries it is creepy because its like, “Oh there’s that one guy who got shot at the bar, or there’s the person who fell into the river and drowned.” It’s like all the tombstones shout out to me, “This will be you!” It reminds me of my own mortality and I fear it. [Pause.] Here…it’s easier to reflect on these people’s lives because they resemble stories.  Each a fragment of a long past time.  It’s hard to imagine how they live…and died.

FRIEND. Never really thought of it that way.
[The light starts to dim a bit.]
FRIEND. It is getting late. We should go and head back. I don’t want to drive back down in the dark.
PHOTOGRAPHER. [Sighs and snaps one last photo while moving towards the RIGHT.]

[Both exit to the RIGHT.]

[As the main light dims a voice is heard.]
VOICE. Too often we think ourselves invincible and we learn too late that we were wrong.  Time is an infinite expansion and each of our lives is but a bit of dust on the long record of humanity.  Fear your own mortality and do great things with the moments you are given.

[A light now focuses on the tree. A tombstone now is lit that was before in shadows. It is newer than the others. It reads.]

“Our Beloved Friend and Artist. Died April 8th, 2005.”

[Curtin Falls.]
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Comments: 11

RealEmotions [2005-04-10 00:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I like how you didn't over do it. You kept it balanced the entire time.

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jadeoracle In reply to RealEmotions [2005-04-10 01:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RealEmotions In reply to jadeoracle [2005-04-10 01:07:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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DDRfan101 [2005-04-09 03:59:07 +0000 UTC]

That was some very nicely done script. The images were well brought across, along with everyone else. It's some nice, quality work you've got here, and I hope to see more.

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jadeoracle In reply to DDRfan101 [2005-04-09 17:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Its funny. When I first saw your message I was very excited that you liked it and then fearful that I wouldn't be able to write anything as intresting as this piece. This was a spur of the moment idea that I developed and my frist attempt at writing in a play format. I was racking my mind as to figure something else to write about. As this was drawn from a real life conversation I started to look on my life to think of another intresting idea. My next piece of writing will probably won't be done for a little while as I have quite a few ideals to format and it should be much longer. I'm not sure if it will be a script for a play or for a movie as of yet. I will keep you posted though and thanks again for the wonderful comment and the watch!

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DDRfan101 In reply to jadeoracle [2005-04-09 17:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem, and it isn't like I'm only going to pay attention to your writings. Most of your photography is awesome, and I loved that picture of the stained glass window ^^

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jadeoracle In reply to DDRfan101 [2005-04-09 18:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! That makes me feel good.

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talentedmrsocks [2005-04-09 02:47:54 +0000 UTC]

amazing. i could visualize the scene in my mind and the writing was really good. it is one of the better one act plays i've read in recent years

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jadeoracle In reply to talentedmrsocks [2005-04-09 02:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Square2 [2005-04-09 02:16:16 +0000 UTC]

wow...thats pretty good..
thats an interesting view about old cemeteries too.
i like the ending to it..

great work!

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jadeoracle In reply to Square2 [2005-04-09 02:19:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks! Although its short I spent a lot of work on this.

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